I THINK IT NEEDS ANOTHER COUPLE CHAPTERS WERE HER AND JAYDEN TALK AND WERE THEY SH HAS THERE BABY AND THEY GET MARRIED AND DEFEIT MASTER XANDRED!

Awww, I'm glad Emily's ok. Great job, it was a really good story :)

awesome job girl!

WOAH! THAT'S AN ENDING! :O That was a good one-shot girl, do another chp. :D

i like itt

Oh wow. :O Okay, see, I like this, don't get me wrong. But you need to edit this a little bit. Jayden is required to have an OC love, even if it's brief. And this is a little too much T for the contest. Maybe cut out the slapping. This was good, but it needs to be changed just a tad. Thanks. ;D