|Reviews for It Could Happen|
| 12-SmileyRose 5/16/13 . chapter 31
hahaha this chapter was funny :D update soon :))
| Sakura478 7/13/12 . chapter 31
Good story it had funny moments but the one where she had their voices in her head I cried. Beautiful job
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 1
I am posting this as constructive criticism. This is not meant to be a flame.
As a whole, you have a strong basis for your plot and the flow of the story - something I give you major kudos for! Due to the immaturity of your writing, there are some things that do need to be developed.
not to rely on spell check. There were a few words spelled correctly, but used incorrectly grammatically. Also you lost your punctuation and capitalization toward the end.
'... She leads him down the street. Into a building and up the stairs before pulling a painted key from around his neck "you still paint your keys" she nodded slowly and opened the door leading him inside.'
It should have been written: '... She leads him down the street into a building and up the stairs, before pulling out a painted key from around her neck. "You still paint your keys," Sasuke said. She nodded slowly and opened the door inside.'
It just reads better. Except for a few tweaks, I actually enjoy your writing and I hope you keep up at it!
| mistressinwaiting 6/29/12 . chapter 30
Aw... So nice... Wah, naruto died first? Gah!
| mistressinwaiting 6/28/12 . chapter 28
Lol! Love it!
| Aimii0 6/19/12 . chapter 26
The story is good so keep it up ! :)
By the way,here's my story and if you have tme to ead and review I'd be thankful. :D
| Aimii0 6/17/12 . chapter 1
SasuSaku ! . Hehe,I love them ! Keep it up !
Btw,can you please review my story? I'd be grateful and I'll continue review your story too !
(School life/ Naruto couples )
| yourstruly247 6/17/12 . chapter 24
Now this was truly amazing. It's got to be my most favourite chapter so far. This is really something that I will carry with me a long time into the future. :)
| yourstruly247 6/17/12 . chapter 13
i love how this didn't have a happy ending. it was just a downright tragedy, (i preferred the sadder ending to be honest, it evoked more emotions.)
| yourstruly247 6/17/12 . chapter 21
i started crying when i read this, which was really odd because i usually don't let reading any stories like this get to me but i guess that when it gets really personal, you just can't help it right? A very touching one-shot.
| yourstruly247 6/17/12 . chapter 7
wow, it's been a while since i reviewed these chapters. This one really did just bring tears to my eyes, and I'm glad that you've kept up with your one-shots. I must say that you've maintained an awesome standard throughout and though I'm only at chapter 7, I'm taking my time to savor your one shots. :) (How on earth did i not subscribe to this story when i reviewed it last time, i have no idea!)
| Timber Wolf of Purity 6/11/12 . chapter 25
_ I like it. I'm on an amnesia themed craze right now, and this was the perfect one to read along with it. :)
| mistressinwaiting 6/6/12 . chapter 24
Wonderful story! U should've made it a separate oneshot! U would have gotten so many reviews.
| Timber Wolf of Purity 6/5/12 . chapter 24
This is so sad! :'-( Bit it is extremely good. This is one of your best chapters. I love them all, but this one is superb.
| SakuracentricIC 12/12/11 . chapter 15
I LOOOOOOOOVE this.
Thumbs up. Awsome writing