 R. Reynolds 8/27/11 . chapter 1I don't even watch Doctor Who, and I thought this was beautiful. Several of my friends have been trying to get me into the show, but I've never had the motivation or time. If the show is anything like this story, however, I'll have to watch it promptly.
-R. Reynolds |
 SG1SamFan 8/26/11 . chapter 1There's something about the phrasing (particularly your use of the phrase "or anything") that seems a bit insecure of River, and I don't think that's her. Certain bits of it just seem a tiny bit off. Eleven's description is good, though, and overall this is cute but not necessarily something I'll remember like some of your other fic. :-) Thanks for sharing, though! |