:)

Loved the ending and the whole outtake.

Aww, a walk down momory lane :)

I don't normally read outtakes but I really really really wanted to read this one and I'm soo glad I did! Edward going to each of his children and then Bella, telling them all they are his favorite! I loved it! and her telling him back was perfect. The icing on the cake was his guilt about the dog - lol!

Thanks so much for sharing these guys with us!

Aww, love this outtake! It had a little bit of everything! :)

I loved the story and this is just lovable. This outtake is MY favorite lol

-roxy

*sniffle* I read this before bed time and it made me feel all warm and fuzzy. How old is Seth now? They had a lot of kiddos but only one girl. I think Edward needs another daughter ;)

It was cute how everyone was his favorite. Daddyward always gets me. You have to keep going. I want to know how Bella felt when she had all these kids.

This was so sweet. I will admit someone posted the link on twitter on I started reading and couldn't stop. SO much love. Please tell me you will be writing more of this or perhaps turn it into a full length story. Excellent work and very well written.

kvsgrl.

I can't believe Seth thought Edward wasn't hIs real father that heart breaking. I hope the issue is resolved. I live their kids! And them (duh).

LOVED THIS OUTTAKE

That was a great chapter or outtake. I really enjoyed seeing Edward so responsible and sincere in his talk with Seth. I miss your story!

I LOVED this outtake!

Thank u for writing this! An awesome outtake for an awesome story! Seths insecurity is so heartwrenching!ur Edward is amazing crying freely infront if his wife and kid! Please more!

Loved it

Hope to read more

Awww... edward doesn't have a favorite their all his favorite lol. I'm so happy they are so happy. And tonya is still a ho!