Amazing story! Really detailed - loved it :)

Hey! I know it's been a while since this was posted/finished but I figure reviews are always appreciated :) This really is one of the best fan fics I've read; you're character development, scene description, and utterly gutsy approach to dark magic and its effects is phenomenal. I can tell this is going to be one those stories I'm so glad to read and so horribly sad to finish.

Lovely story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep up the good work.

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You know what? You should have written the original Ron. Period.

Lucie

Wow. Simply wow. The second to last paragraph where Ron showers Hermione is simply the most heartbreaking scene of the whole story so far. I wish that this Ron was the one she married in the books. I wish this Ron was the Ron in all the other stories. I wish to meet someone like this Ron one day. :) He sort of reminds me of Rory Williams.

Lucie

It's always such a blessing to find a story of an apparently mature writer. Neither Harry nor Hermione are OOC, at least to me they're not.

Oh the suspense. What shall happen next? Frankly, I'm so looking forward to finding out that I've been putting off reading the next chapter for the past hour. XD

Also, I must commend you for your portrayal of Ron. He's actually a real, nice, plastic character! Congratulations! It's such a relief after all those stupid!Rons and violent!Rons. More's the pity that Hermione is ultimately going to end up with Draco. Right? Right?

I wonder what your Draco is like. And I'm sure I'll be happy to find out.

Thank you for an amazing story, written masterfully by an insightful author.

Lucie

I find that Big Girls Don't Cry by Fergie goes really well with this chapeter and the next. Amazing story, but I can't wait for the dramione.

finally draco is here...phew!

i cant help but criticize the prolonged chapters with nothing interesting...its sorta boring...if you have an amazing plot please just dont icrease the words and chapters by dragging stuff

ths chapter just felt like a filler...

ummmm...i have to tell you this that...yu give a lot of importance in explaining stuff about insignificant characters... try to keep that to a minimum...it gets a little repetitive ...like mentioning so many people all together and their condition...i felt so coz i was again skimming through this chapter...

this was a chapter i completely enjoyed and read without skimming through any part...it was interesting with something substantial happening...good writing

i hope you dont feel bad about my criticism ...now this chapter had a brilliant ending where something interesting is gonna happen...

this story is definitely worth a read if people have patience...i again found this preparation before the war part dragggggggiing...because they just keep planing and planing and mourning...no offence its interesting and am waiting to read further but i did skim through this chapter...