lovely, hoping for an update soon!

Good chapter.

Wasn't expecting Em to call Harry 'daddy' already. So sad about Liz.

Hermione's calm and agreeable while Ron and Ginny are not. I'm surprised that Harry didn't predict when Ginny would get upset. Though I'm surprised that Ron didn't complain during that time either.

Good chapter.

Whoa, they might be related? Hmmm...that make sense since the pureblood community in England isn't large and the Black family tree showed links among families.

They started the search for Harry. Good that Molly's objections have been overruled. Good that the family is supporting their search. Their search is very different that the camping trip from DH and I'm glad. Never did like the camping trip.

Good chapter.

Liz's condition was a complete surprise. Am surprised she didn't feel any pain since the attack.

I can easily picture Harry working with the kids since they're young and innocent compared to teenagers and adults.

Good chapter.

Wow, Harry just woke up, but he's capable of being interrogated by all those people. What happened to doctor who want their patient to rest and recover before being grilled?

Interesting beginning and very fast paced.

I had to read the chapter a couple of times to understand what was happening, especially at the beginning. At first, I thought it was during DH then I finally realized it was after the battle of HBP.

I don't understand how it's possible for the death eaters to follow them while driving. Since they're 'pureblood', the idea of them using a vehicle is absurd. Following on brooms is logical, but not during the middle of the day. So that section was confusing.

Wow, Draco's attitude is extreme, especially in regard to the killing curse.

After the fight, I was wondering why the bystanders were acting as though magic wasn't an issue. So that section was confusing as well since I expect Harry to create a portkey to land him in the middle of open thoroughfare full of people.

I'm so glad Emily likes Ginny so much.

Emily's matter-of-fact acceptance that Ginny will be her mum is great!

I was wondering how we were going to get Ginny, Ron, and Hermione back.

Interesting beginning.

Great story so far! I got such a kick out of Emily and the twins...and later Hermione & Molly! :) Very entertaining. I really hope you'll be continuing this! I'd love to see them get married before you end this story.

Cute chapter! I enjoyed the banter with a very precocious little girl, the "pancakes are for supper and pizza for breakfast", and the way Em & Ginny woke Harry up from his nap. Very fun! I can just imagine the reaction from the Weasleys, seeing Harry and hearing him called Daddy!

This was such an enjoyable chapter! I loved the parts about the 'favorite broom closets' and Harry's answer to Det. Craft's question about them! ;D Oh yeah, and also Ginny's threat to Ron about not having any bogeys left! lol

FYI, to/too have been confused several times in several stories. (ex: "I want to go too." vs. "He didn't want me to.")

I'm glad that Hermione, Ron, & Ginny left to find Harry, and it looks promising now that they're in the same town! :) I liked George's line about wanting their investor back as well. This part about Harry being asked to adopt Emily as his own child reminded me of another story where Harry was asked to adopt Dudley's magical daughter. You may want to be more careful about proofreading though.

I liked Harry's comments about the Daily Prophet...and how the Minister says whether he's been a 'good boy' or not! :)