THE MOB RULES!

Excellent choice!

Okay setlist (your choice not mine) but there's one band that I think is a absolute must if you're doing a guitar hero story with song lyrics in it. And that band is DRAGONFORCE!

You know who just realized you should've included in here? The band from Guitar Hero World Tour: Marcus Fretshredder (Death Metal, Viking Metal), Shirley Crowley (Alternative Metal, Hard Rock), Riki Lee (Glam Rock, Classic Rock) and Matty Cannz (Hard Rock, Heavy Metal).

Awesome chapter.

'Forced to play Metallica songs for eternity', I find that some what halarious.

Great chapter.

I like this story. The storyline is good. The song selection however, eh, not so much. But it's the music you chose and I have no right tell you what to listen to. Still this is good storyline. I have a story that I'm currently working on and this story was kind of an inspriation for it. It will be a crossover between 'Guitar Hero' and 'I'm in the Band'. Be sure to check it out when I start publishing it.

I really do enjoy the style you are using. There is no better way to make a GH fic then to put in song lyrics.

Although, it gets repetitive after 7 times. Just try to mix it up a bit.

As for the next character, I suggest Xaivier Stone, playing guitar.

I was wondering if you would put Izzy Sparks in this story. I would be very happy if you do.

This is a good story, I want to happens. Write more