Great story.

Sounds fascinating, I look forwards to seeing where you go with this :)

I like the way you write Hermione and Harry in this... the atmosphere is also really good/sad with an interesting darkness even while the closeness between them is shown.

Rae.

I like the idea. You have put much thought into this and I am really interested to learn more about the list, how Harry and Hermione and the rest cope with it etc.

What lacked in the original book, in my opinion, is the grief. It all goes too fast.

I will definetely keep track of this one.

The writing is neat and I haven't spotted any errors (not that it is my native language, but still, sometimes there are things that cath you eyes)

Keep up the good work.