Well, it certainly seems like a promising story with an interesting plot. Keep it up, but remember not to hurry and rush chapters. Take your time, but don't get caught up with everything like me. I'm currently at chapter 1 of my story.

I think this chapter is my favorite so far! Billy's backstory was absolutely amazing. Very well written, very well thought up, and you had the right emotions while describing it. :)

I can't wait to read more! Please update!

Will

I am so sorry it took me so long to review this!

Anyways-positively wonderful! I love that he called Mac, and...wonderful. :)

Please update soon!

O.k. sorry that this is on not latest chapter, but FF was being a nincompoop about review posting. So on with the review. You're back! EEEEEE! First off, the story is splendiferous. I always loved the Billy/Mac interacting in the books and you just made it amazing. I read Enchantress too ( got on pre-order from amazon so it came the day it came out. Which was awesome-sauce), and was both super excited with it. I mean, it's just like said ties up almost every little loose ends, but also super said cause it means the series is gone. O.k. to wrap it up YOUR STORY IS AWESOMELY AMAZING.

Well thanks for giving us notice, and I hope everything goes as well as it can. Best of luck for whatever happens to you. FF will miss an amazing writer.

Whoa! Those two chapters were awesome! And YAY for the brief return of Black Hawk!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Also-Miller's short speech to Black Hawk? You nailed it. I LOVED that. :)

Sorry for the belated review. :( I'm slow...

ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER! Really Cedargirl. Well, anyway this is getting more and more exciting. I can't tell how much I love this story.

I'm so sorry I took so long to review these two chappies...here I am!

Wow. Splendid, once again! Please update soon. :) I want to find out what happens to Bill and BH.

I just read the entire story in one sitting, and am dying for more. great characterization and plot!

Awesome. This is an great chapter, nice action. I liked the way you showed what Billy could do with his aura. This is one of my favorite stories on FF. Can't wait and good luck at your recital.

This is amazing, and makes sense. UPDATE! I need to know what is happening to Billy and Black Hawk. I like how your writing style is similar to Scott's.

YES! You updated. Also Millers is evil and I love Billy. This is getting more and more interesting.

Boy oh boy, update SOON! ! You got that bad guy perfectly.

Will you marry me?

Well, I don't really want to marry you, but you have written two fanfics staring my favorite (Billy the Kid. I think I'm obsessed, I might even fangirl over Billy), and third favoite (Black Hawk. Mac's my second.) You are forever in my dept, I can't wait to read the next instalment.

Uhhhhh-ohhhhh...BILLY, RUN FOR YOUR LIFEEE!

Please update-I need to know what happens