This whole story was excellent, a very nice aside into some of the behind the scenes interactions between teammates. I have actually never played Stolen Memory, but I like your approach to what I know of her character.

Garrus you also did well. It feels like he's standing on the precipice again, and Kasumi pulls him back with a few words.

Everything is clean and well done.

Great work on this. Very interesting dynamic between the two.

Why doesn't FanFiction make a Super Like button? The back story in this was just damn right impressive! I loved how you brought Sidonis in and tied Kasumi in with her being back on Omega for a job. Then later them both being on the same ship and having to work out their past differences. Kasumi is one of my all-time favorite characters in the ME universe. I really hope that they kept her for the 3rd installment.

Loved it! Great job.