By starting it with detailed sensations and descriptions of sensations Henry had lost, you help us readers to imagine and experience the day to day frustration. When it moves to the kids and Suzy, we experience the same heartbreak. Those last three lines seemed like a snippet of poetry. Well done!

Yeah, this is a very short and sweet fic. :) A good stepping stone if you ever move on to longer fics.

This was great. :) And i too wish that the community for this was bigger. I only started watching a few days ago but I'm obsessed!

Amazingly well written, the part about the kids was soooo sweet! :D

I really enjoyed this. Simple and so beautiful, and a really good insight into Henry's inner turmoil about being dead. Spirited is one of my favourite shows and I always love it when someone posts a new fic about it. Good job.