Awesome short stories! Wow funny at times, depressing at others, it was great! Wow I just couldn't wrap my mind around what could have happened, that's what made me sad. I loved all the other bits though...haha that's what she said ;). Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more of your stories! Until next time, Laila :k

Great chapter and great concept! I'm glad you wrote this. Childbirth in America is terrible-for a first world country we have a terrible infant/mother mortality rate. Seems like you guys do things better in Australia. Lol. No, really, a very sweet chapter.

Oh.my.god. This is by far...the best chapter ever !LOL! Wooo. Go silkie! Haha. So cute. :3

Uhhmm. Hmmm. I've only remembered now that you said in one chap in Promises that Star can't wear rings because she melts them or sumthing like that...soooo how does the hologram ring work on her? @_@

*sniff* i'm at a loss for words. ToT

...Whoa. The "Mom" moment was even more powerful from Selina's POV than Dick's... and that's saying a lot.

This may be my favorite one of the outtakes.

All right, everybody! Here it comes!

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BAWWW.

I swear, you're the only author whose writing can make me form an emotional attachment to a grub that eats boots and plays with cans.

The emotional headspace behind this one is absolutely perfect; I'm glad you posted it just as it is.

It's the natural progression of the previous scene, and you didn't pollute it with anything other than what it had to be. I especially appreciate that you didn't go for a cliché of him seeing images of Jason during sex. Too many people would take that route, but his guilt here as he regains his rational mind is more than enough.

...I just got the Grayson referance. Hopefully Skippy won't made an appearance

I love your touch series. The twist and turns had me invested as did your mastery over the titans' characters. This is like the third time I've gone on a reread binge of outtakes in a short amount of time. Now having said that, what the heck? No outtake involving a pregnet Starfire sneaking on to her home planet, killing a beast with her barehands, and feeding it to Batman? Seriously, you can't just tease something like that and leave the world wondering...even though I know you're done with these. Just thought I rant about that. Nonetheless, I really, really love this series.

Hi I love your stories especially the outtakes to them and i was wondering if u would ever do an outtake one Bruce/batman. Like how he felt when night wing ran off on his suicide mission or how he felt when selina was the one to save night wing or when they called each other mom and son. And how he feels about night wing It would be really cool if u wrote about that

oi nossa ficou MARAVILHOSO! nossa eu não esperava mais! não mesmo! srsrsrrsrs

obrigada por mais esta fic!

beijos!

Yup, bawling in my room now. Thanks xD... thank god I have a single dorm...

So throughout this whole chapter I was trying not to cry... then I got to the part when Dick gives the baby to Alfred and says he always thought of him as a grandfather... I lost it. I started crying right there. Couldn't take it anymore, it was too sweet.

When that call came in I started freaking out. I couldn't believe it, her water broke! One of my favorite parts in this chapter is when Dick bends over to try and get a glimpse of the baby and him and Mar'i just stare at each other.

I got so scared when they realized there was way too much blood. I had to keep reminding myself that she lived in Promise and that they showed off Mar'i to his parents. I was so scared and knowing that was the only thing that calmed me, somewhat.

I love how Silkie is overprotective and how Galfore threatened everyone with his soral. I love how Dick needed help with the diaper, and that Beast Boy had to teach him.

I love how Dick decided to wait until Star was there to show off the baby. That was so sweet of him.

OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Best chapter ever :)

Oh, Kryalla I love you! :') Your writing... touches the heart. You're the best!

so sad to see this story go. but hopefully you'll be back soon. i'm working on some fan art if you want me to send you the link when i get it posted. (tecnology hates me). have you ever concidered doing other ships, like ROMY from x-men evolution or somthing? i think you'd do well with that character (You'd do well with all of the in my opinion.) it's rogue and remy. just a thought. anyways so thankful for your stories. my days lately have been next to pure hell and your updates give me somthing to look forward too. now i get to read them over again, boyah! hope your writing goes well. i know things will go swimmingly. :)

good luck!

Rose