I've just reread the whole story, and the new part is wonderful! The plot and the character interactions are so intricate... I wonder if Zo'or has some clue about Renee's resistance ties? Anyway, I can't wait to read more!

Excellent. Absolutely excellent. Though I wonder what end you're going to lead this fanfic to, since the identity of the killer has been discovered. Just curious, not critical.

great story

Good Lord! you can't just leave it like THAT! i actually wanted to get some sleep tonight! argh! (bangs head on the wall...'oww') are you really gonna make me take those darn sleeping pills again?

(listens to one soft cricket chirp) Judging by the silence in the room i can see that you are.

Oh, all right! but i'll give you 2 days max to update again! if you don't i'll start hunting for all the PB&Js i can find until the entire world is consumed! Those darn taelons won't have a world worth ruling! (evil laugh!)

Until next update...or my next mental breakdown. ttfn!

wow i didn't even see that coming. great story i hope you post more soon.

Wow. This is totally beautiful. I especially loved the description of the Portal Nexus in the beginning, trisymmetrical : wonderful, just great. I don't know, I like details like that.

Suspence !

It'S nice seeing more of this story being posted after such a long absence. Thank you, this is some wonderful work here.

The plot is getting thicker. Hadn't you posted that at the sphere a couple of months or years back ?

This is utterly fantastic! A polished, fast-paced, suspenseful piece... what other stories/novels have you written? Also, thank you, thank you, thank you for mentioning Nigeria in your story!

Woah. Nice new chapter. Nice to know too that Sandoval has got his doubts about Kincaid. Nice, really nice.

Great story, can't wait to see what happens next. This is really good.

Yeah, Zo'or is certainly NOT going to be happy about that. More of Lubata and his reasons soon ?

Just a last minute thought. (This review should be with seventh chapter, ff.net just won't let me do it.) A thought I said : an orchid, plus blond hair with the guy, plus a message to Zo'or and Zo'or wanting to scoot out of this as soon as he can ? Lazarus perhaps ? Well, Boone in Lazarus' body but you knew what that meant.

Gee... Thanks for the long part ! This guy with Lubata in that dark little avenue seems to me like that Max Pratt guy Da'an bought the service of. If this is set before Thicker Than Blood, it should fit. Anyway, thanks for keeping up such great developments. I'm eagerly awaiting the next part of it.

A message to Zo'or ? This keeps getting better and better. And the fact that the Doctor of the beginning is involved also gets interesting. I'd love to read more of this !

It's getting better and better. Love the power struggle between Da'an and Ni'ram, before this last one was killed.