Oh chapter 3's nice, very nice ! Sandoval is being himself and right. I like that. And I like the minor Renée-pays-for-infos-so-she-get-them-earlier-than-YOU-do thought with Augur. Nicely done.

An orchid ? Boone liked orchids, and Zo'or might know things about Boone that most people don't know. But Boone wouldn't do that - I mean murder innocent (relatively innocent) people ? Humm... Very interesting. A certainly good-plotted story Nomad.

Impressive beginning, really ! Nice writing. And I especially love these comments of Ri'im and how you describe the Taelons' thinking. Fabulous, sincerely. I'd appreciate another part though.