|Reviews for These Lines of Lightening|
| chris 4/23/13 . chapter 2
| XandyNZ 3/31/13 . chapter 2
Love this AU... the way that Moriarty was just different/wrong, because he didn't have an aura, or was it a ever-changing one?
| Jezziez81 3/14/13 . chapter 2
A wonderful story with all this descriptions of the colours (my translator didn't even knew all of them :D).
And so sweet, how John did not know his own colours when they showed in Sherlock's.
| Guest 2/13/13 . chapter 2
Very, very intense and captivating. Pure genius, the way you use words! With that expressive style you create a tempo which makes it impossible to stop reading ;-)
Thanks a lot!
| Lytari Talon 1/22/13 . chapter 2
| Triple Rainbow 11/9/12 . chapter 2
| Bittersweet Fable 11/8/12 . chapter 2
That was... Oh boy I loved it
There's something that only truly beautiful writing can create in a person, this sort of... peace, a knowledge that there are still things in the world that are worth 'it'.
Many warm fuzzes from that story
| silver cat 777 8/13/12 . chapter 2
This is perfectly wonderful.
| AkashaV 8/7/12 . chapter 2
| Yuki 7/22/12 . chapter 2
Wow... that was just bloody awesome, your words, explanations, the way it all fit, I love how you worded everything, so many adjectives yes... but still so very damn beautiful! Perfect... gosh, thank you, keep up the good work, hope to read more stories of Sherlock/John like this from you...
| Rhyolight04 5/29/12 . chapter 2
Strange and convincing and so very beautiful.
| sami1010220 5/6/12 . chapter 2
wow, that was beautiful. your writing style and the plot were both great, but your fantastic descriptions were just perfect. great job!
| str4yk1tt3n 4/10/12 . chapter 2
This was lovely.
| Mo 4/9/12 . chapter 2
That was amazing
| ArtisticallyFlaved 2/18/12 . chapter 1
I love the premises - that's why I clicked it (obviously), but I don't think I can finish this. I appreciate the fact that you have a large vocabulary, and I'm not too bothered by the fact that I don't understand half of them (in fact, I've got some to add to my own vocab! Whoo!) but...you've made it over complicated.
The first line for the third scene is a beautiful example of that.
I applaud you for imbuing your story with enough intelligence that I feel like an idiot reading it xD Just...yeah. -headdesk-