|Reviews for Being Sebastian|
| DriveOverForce 6/16/13 . chapter 26
I can't decide whether the ending was good or bad.
Viola and Olivia in the movie gave way to amazing fanfiction. I guess yours gave way to something that we could conjure up our own story of how they will end up together. You gave us room for a lot of imagination and I thank you for that. I believe the journey of those two aren't done. And I think you know that. ;-)
| Guest 4/27/13 . chapter 26
Wow, such an amazing story. You made it in your own and that was perfect.
Glad they have their second change to start. This two just perfect, like you said 'the golden couple'. Can someone make a movie for this two? I know I just dreamt about it, but really anything could happen right.
Thank you for this story.
| AvidReader1996Ash 4/20/13 . chapter 26
Loved it! Read it all the way through. A sequel?
| hrwillden 4/12/13 . chapter 1
I have read this story so much. Please make a sequel I want to know what happens with everyone
| N7-Frost 4/12/13 . chapter 26
Now I must say, that was a very good story. Period.
Aside from a few minor grammatical errors, the only constructive suggestion I have would be maybe at the end of the last chapter, if the two "possibility" paragraphs were switched around. Just so the story ends on a hopeful note. Unless of course, that was intentional. Regardless, it was still very well written and is going on my favourites list. :)
| Zweley 2/21/13 . chapter 26
I've read this in one night. And now it's almost morning...I was so tired but this story is so good it kept me hooked.
You did it. I have no words for this. All I could say after the last chapter was "Oh. My. Gosh."
I must say that this isn't the best Olivia/Viola fanfic I've read. Honestly, I mean nothing bad by this, but the beginning seemed too rushed to me. It didn't quite fit and I found the actions sometimes a bit cliche..also, as much as I agree to all the messages about friendship and love..they were a bit too much at some point. I just say this as help for the next time. Honest.
But in the middle of the story..BAM. you took me off guard. LOVED IT. The reason why I love this fic so much is because it felt like reading a book..
And listen, I review lots of She's The Man fics lately..they all give me a different feeling while reading.
Bu with this one it's like reading a book and feeling like you're there with them. I just love how you wrote the friendship between everyone. It felt like they actually were my friends and I personally knew them and went to that school with them. I know these aren't your characters, but having the ability to do this! You made it better than the movie.
Olivia and Viola... I love these two anyway, no matter what. But you've written this so well. The chemistry is so good and the dialogue! Whoa. It just didn't get boring. Most of the time I get bored when two characters are all over each other and there's too much fluff. Well you did this perfectly.
I could talk all night long about how good I think you wrote the relationship between these two, but that would be too long.
You should think about writing a book.
Dude, I seriously felt sad of the thought that the gang would leave. I didn't want the story to end. I want to read how happy everyone is and how cute they all are and me smiling.. Or something like that.
Sooooooo please make a sequel!
The ending..it was good but it kept me hanging and I need more.
| Stocktakewriting 2/10/13 . chapter 11
Reading this twice now and I wished I reviewed more:( but yeah ,love it :D
| Guest 1/18/13 . chapter 22
You should consider writing a sequel to this maybe after or during their college years that's happy cause honestly I hate the way this ended I wanted a happy ending but overall the story was GREAT! PLEASE WRITE MORE
| Noob 1/6/13 . chapter 26
I absolutely love your story but I also hated the ending. But that's just because I'm horrible with bittersweet goodbyes. Great fic. Keep on writing.
| Lazua 1/2/13 . chapter 26
That ending! It was so great, but I hated being left hanging there. Why must you torture me so? I loved every moment of the story though. I hope they stay together, but anything could happen.
| RedLinen19 12/25/12 . chapter 26
You crushed my heart with that ending but I loved every moment of reading this story :)
| Guest 9/28/12 . chapter 26
hi I'm from Brazil loved this fanfic
second season please please please please please please please please !
| gleekRBD 9/28/12 . chapter 20
| Grace 9/7/12 . chapter 26
Omgggg noooo this is downright trolling LOL! ): but I must admit I liked it, because this kinda plots are really hard to come with a satisfactory ending. So you did great! I noticed several tenses mistakes but well heeeeck, I loved the development and everything. Olivia x Viola. C;
| Everleigh16 8/21/12 . chapter 26
NOOOOOOOOOOO that can't be the end of this amazing fic PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!