This was funny, I enjoyed it.

That was cute

Haha! This was adorably hilarious! Its sad that Punzie was crying at the end, but the whole "Now I'm the bad guy" line was very fitting.

OMG!

I have a three-year-old cousin, so trust me when I tell you this was absolutely perfect. xDD This was so funny and heartwarming to read! So could've been in the movie! xD

Way to be spot-on on a child's behavior!

Haha this is so funny. One thing I don't get is why didn't Gothel take rapunzel out just once to see the lights? She could have made a cloak like hers to keep her hidden. Then sneek out at night to the lake. \

xDDDDD Totally believable, and one hundred percent in-character! xDDD

Poor Gothel; she must have known when she took Rapunzel she'd experience milestones like the "Why?" phase! Gothel is my favourite Tangled character, and I think you portrayed her perfectly for this scenario! Excellent job!

Great job on this story and keeping them

in character!

Awwww. 3

You have them both so in character. This was adorable. ]

This is a cute story. I like that the characters are true to their wonderfully Disney made characters. Good job.

Great story! I love Rapunzal. I'm watching the movie right now! :)

very cute story.

Awesome except for where you wrote can when you meant can't.