That was awesome, you're such a good writer!

interesting.

This is GREAT!

Excellent work. You have told the story beautifully...I love the metaphors with the road and the paths, etc. Hey, are you ever gonna write a sequel to this? Because I really think this has a lot of potential...

Hmm. I think I'm confused. I don't know if it's the fic that's confusing me or the time of day.

Anyway, good fic (from the bit I'm awake enough to understand.)

Very, very intriguing...beautiful word choice on the different paths. Nice job! *AO