I really enjoy reading your story so far. I hope you can finish it really soon. I can't wait to see the ending.

Hey, liking the story so far! Hope you continue it, considering there is a horrible lack of fics for Sacred Blacksmith xD. Thanks for writing!

A nice, brief, and to the point chapter and very well told. Though I'm wondering whether or not they're ever going to continue the manga, but that's neither here nor there. Anyways, great job and I look forward to the next chapter.

NICE!

I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more soon!

BYe

I like your story so far. Although it is only one chapter so far, I like how you arestarting to lay the ground work for future chapters. I also like how you have kept the characters mostly in character whilst factoring in several months since we last saw them.

I do hope you continue with this story, it's been about 8 months since you posted the first chapter, and I would hate for this story to die off before it has the chance to shine.

Hoping for more!

BYe

I like the start, hope you continue. Still, I agree with one of the previous reviewers, that this behavior doesn't exactly fit Luke, but I know from my own writing how hard it is to get the demeanor and dialogue of established characters right. Otherwise, great job and thanks for sharing.

Hell year sick and tired of oneshots full fleged storys are much better after what I read two things occured to me about time and will she get the Katana off him

you have a good concept so far...idk where exactly you're gonna go i.e: siegfried attacks again, valbanill strikes etc. or just have the romance be the center of attention

however you seemed to kinda alter Luke's character being that he's never that straight forward with anything in the manga or anime and it seemed sorta brief, you know, milk it for all it's worth man, sacred blacksmith has good character depth why not use it. its good just elaborate a bit more and get the reader more involved.

and thnx for your review on my fic. i have the rest plotted out i just need to physically type it hopefully in the next week or so it will all be done.

all in all pretty good fic so far.

I think it's great to see someone other than myself thinking of a multi chapter story for this fandom, only I'm still working on mine which is why I haven't posted any of it as of yet.

Your story has a great start, but I've always found it best to work your way into the main plot the way most other stories run. However, you must do as you are comfortable with, and thus far your approach is sounding fine. I eagerly await your next update as I'm intrigued to see what all you plan to do with this story.