Characterization is spot on. I'm gueesing you read the comic. But it sounds like to me that damian just jealous.

Aweee - neat. Wasn't expectin' mister todd, there.

Calin and Damien are so wonderful together.

Thanks for sharing!

VVVVVAAAAAAAAL

I screamed when Colin was stuck in that coffin thing and my dog got mad and rammed my door.

I love how you wrote Jason, I fucking love Jason so much.

And I love Colin and Damian at the end, it just made me so happy.

I like to think Colin finishes sentences in his head when Damian says things like that too him, not only to make him think that D cares about him, but because he actually believes that he honestly cares about him and that's just his way of expressing it.

Loved this one so much Val.

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Hahahahahah Love it:)

Loved it.

wonderful i loved it

Aww...kinda cute. Very scary burying sequence! Good writing.