Wow, you've really grown as a writer. There was great flow to this story, from the way the characters progressed to the way thoughts flowed with action.

I've always enjoyed your SasuHina. You bring a quirkiness to their relationship that is really endearing. I'm glad your still writing!

- L

Wow! I totally love this!

beautifully written! i love how Hinata has some spunk in this story yet she still remains shy. her shyness is the main reason i adore her! awesome work :)

that was really cute!

Love the line "But Sasuke's lips were warm, contrary to her suspicions." This story is adorable.

Cuuuute! I like how your SasuHina always acknowledges the problems that would occur in a relationship between two quiet, passive people and seeks to overcome those problems. (Still - to show my bias - I think the problems between two people alike in temperament wouldn't be nearly as bad as the problems between two wildly different people like Hinata Naruto.) It was nice how Hinata got the ball rolling by helping Sasuke with his wounds and kissing him for the first time, then Sasuke returned the favor by helping her with her wounds and giving her the big kiss at the end. (He saved it for the perfect moment.) Nice job on this. :)

The ending was unexpected but it made the whole story cute HAHA

great one shot

this is sooo cute! I haven't been reading fics from this pairing for a long time. :)

cake story! :D

I like it. It's in your usual style; brief, succinct and still having a lot of depth. I suppose this story is befitting of two characters who are quiet and generally passive. Thanks for a good read :)

I once again love you. That was so freakingawesome. Not just freaking or awesome, but freakingawesome.

I loved the reaction of Sasuke's family.

I also loved the section with Sasuke's thoughts on Hinata's kissing game. XD

I wish there had been a scene with Hinata's family cuz the Hyuugas are a funny lot to mess with.

But other than that, fantastic fic as usual!

This is probably the most realistic Hinata-Sasuke arranged marriage story that I have ever read. I like it to no end, the descriptions aren't over the top and you kept the dialogue simple and very in character.

This is definitely the best arranged marriage fic I have ever read, straight to the highly deserved spot on my favorites list.

There must be more SasuHina fics like this. I really enjoyed myself reading through this story, my only disappointment is that it ended lol I guess I'm just a needy person cuz I can't get enough of your stories and I want more. I hope you'll make more of this great stories because the plotlines are always humorous and interesting to read because of how awkward you make the characters be around each other.

So cute !