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2012 1/25/12 . chapter 2 We all have a potential to write and you too. I can see where your going in this story, but there is a slight problem. You're writting to fast and what I mean by this that the events are happening too quickly instead of having a steady pacee. I would suggest you take your time, put more details, a bit more drama ( not too much or it will kill the story) and suspense. Don't take this the wrong because I truly enjoy your story and it make a wonderful story too. |
Guest 1/2/12 . chapter 6 What the hell you're story is really good and I want you to finish it! |
Pieces Of My Heart 11/20/11 . chapter 5You aren't just going to leave this story hanging, right? Because, I think this story is really good, and I want to read it all the way to the end. Please update! |
love10134 11/1/11 . chapter 5Update soon i love this story (: |
gottalovetheboywiththebread 10/30/11 . chapter 5I REALLY like it! update soon! |
LuvDanceGirl 9/13/11 . chapter 3Another sweet chapter! |
Danielle 9/6/11 . chapter 2 OMG! When is the next Chapter out? |
LuvDanceGirl 9/5/11 . chapter 2Aww that was sweet! |
LuvDanceGirl 9/5/11 . chapter 2Aww that was sweet! |
Kimikumexi 9/4/11 . chapter 1 Omg please write more |
Candy Couture 9/3/11 . chapter 1:O DRAMA! Update soon :) |
Guest 8/31/11 . chapter 1 where is the rest of the contine |
LuvDanceGirl 8/30/11 . chapter 1I definetly want to read more! Gosh, Wes is so stupid for leaving Macy. |