 UrgeToDance 9/3/11 . chapter 1This fic was VERY well written. You did an amazing job of capturing the characters. The only thing I don't like... I wish it was much, much longer (because that's how much I loved it). ( |
 kalirush 8/30/11 . chapter 1This is a completely awesome missing scene. Your Catalina and Ross are completely in character. I love the road trip vibe.
Also, I totally cracked up at "Seriously, what could be more delightfully unassuming than a fuzzy toy bear hold an ice cream cone? Rebecca was pretty sure the only possible answer to that was: nothing."
It explains *everything* about their sudden appearance in the battle in Central. :D |
 S 8/29/11 . chapter 1 This story sorta reminds me of a motivational poster that I saw. *awesome face* Something along the lines of "Mustang: He's fleeing in an ice cream truck"...
Havoc General Supply speciality? What kind of store does Jean Havoc's family run? XD Also I can guess why Rebecca said to give Gruman a "wide berth"...
Made me happy! |
 GeneralGeneric 8/29/11 . chapter 1There's such a lack of Maria and Rebecca fics out there, so thanks for writing this. I completely forgot that the two were working together for the coup's supplies.
The highlights for me were a) when Maria mentions saving the Emperor of Xing (that's just awesome) and b) Rebecca's pep talk at the end. They seem to make a good pair of friends. |