Poor Pika

These stories are very sweet. I like them. :)

That was so darn cute! :D

Aw, Pika I can't believe he was jealous! I wonder what Red and Yellow were doing in that room o_o

I really loved it! And 12 years? Wow! :O I've done ballet since I was 8, but stopped at 11. I still practice every now and then, but it's not the same xD I loved the way you described how Gold loved Crystal. And in third person, too! I admire that about you. You're able to pour so much emotion into your stories, no matter what _

Why haven't I reviewed this yet? I'm crazy not to, it's so amazing! I wish I could put so much emotion and detail into my writing as you do. Mine's just... bleh. xD

I just love it! .

this is so cute...keep up the good work!

I don't really understand why this story has so little reviews. It's written with a lot of feeling and I teared up a little up during the apologizing scene.

Great job!

I'm so confused !

Why doesn't this have more reviews ?

Okay, you need to know you did an amazing job at writing this one shot and THANK YOU (!) for doing a great job at writing an OldRival fic! Honestly, I was seriously gonna cry when they were cryin and holding each other and feeling all 'Oh I'm sorry!' and how they both have strong prides and how Green finally breaks down and GAH! Amazing one shot is amazing .

You should publish more OldRival fics if they come out as emotional and great as this!

-Vanessa

I'm so confused !

Why doesn't this have more reviews ?

Okay, you need to know you did an amazing job at writing this one shot and THANK YOU (!) for doing a great job at writing an OldRival fic! Honestly, I was seriously gonna cry when they were cryin and holding each other and feeling all 'Oh I'm sorry!' and how they both have strong prides and how Green finally breaks down and GAH! Amazing one shot is amazing .

You should publish more OldRival fics if they come out as emotional and great as this!

-Vanessa