Hi

I like this fic, but I have a few complaints.

The quality is good in some areas; good narration, interaction, dialog, suspense, drama and humor/cuteness. I do think there is needs more detail, and a few other details don't make sense to me, shall I elaborate?

The character portrayal is basically good, but they need more work.

The basic story is great. I love it a lot, but apart from a few typos and such, I think the story should be longer.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive, but I am dubious about a tiny detail.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.

Also, I don't like the concept of Evil. Shall I elaborate?

Also, I think there should be a sequel. I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker

Amazing :) i really enjoyed this story and I do hope you write more.

This was a nice story. It's interesting how's Nefario relationship with the girls.

i luv this story so much,i almost broke the favorite button!Great job!

LOL.

Sounds like something that would happen if Despicable Me was an animated series.