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Roaming Firefly 5/28/12 . chapter 37
Welcome back :) Good to hear that you feel good about how you did on your exams, and I wish you all the best in college.

So Nate is biting the bullet and starting out with a bang huh? Although...it might not have been a very good idea to just come out and reveal Chaos and piss off the demon-ridden ex-Shinra assassin with the big ass guns...just sayin'

Can't wait to see everyone's reactions :)
Mediacat15 5/27/12 . chapter 37
Oh crap Nate, don't tell them that they are just fiction! You want to get shot? I'm really excited that he's finally telling them about who he is and I CAN'T WAIT till the next chappta to see their reactions! This has been one of my favorite chapters so far. Thank you for posting and I hope homework is not a bitch(but that's probably a fail). I can't wait for the next one! XD
kat 5/24/12 . chapter 37
Dun dun duuuuuunnnnn! Lol!
Bmonti 5/24/12 . chapter 37
whoop what a chap. what an ending. ure chapters always seem to make me want to read more. i so want to know what everyones reactions are going to be like. i have to say this has got to be one of ure best endings eva really enjoyed it. but why did he tell everyone exept cloud... is everyone going to tell him?

have a cookie hope u like it _ for all your hard work
Botoingness 5/23/12 . chapter 37
Dang! Things just got crazy up in here! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Also, I think you are still doing on awesome job! The only thing that kinda bugs me is that Vincent isn't supposed to know about the protomateria until Dirge of Cerberus. But meh, it's not that big of a deal.

Also, yes, I am alive. Just been very busy and I plan on updating my story very soon.
KievaLynn 5/23/12 . chapter 37
Woot! Glad to see you back, I was starting to get worried. Now we've all got to get on Boto's case about Chosen... Anyway, excellent chapter. I'm a big, big fan of those 'cat is out of the bag' truth revealed moments, so this is one I've been looking forward to. It'll be interesting to see how everyone reacts next time. Really, Nate was kind of blunt here to be honest. But then again, he really doesn't know whether the world he's in is somehow real or not, and I guess if he wants to be totally truthful at this point then "You're fictional" is the only way to do it. I particularly feel sorry for Nanaki, being in the middle since he knew...
little101 5/23/12 . chapter 37
oh my god
CloudRed1988 5/23/12 . chapter 37
So the cat is out of the bag...i wonder what will the reaction of the FFVII gang will think...anyway plz update ASAP!
kenegi 5/23/12 . chapter 37
Hum, is Nate going to give vincent lucrecia's location to him. It'll be a good way to pacify him.
Velkan Wulf 5/23/12 . chapter 37
Holy shit cakes! I have to say that was the best ending to one of your chapters yet, but damn you for another cliffhanger :P. Regardless the 3 week wait was more then worth it, I can't wait to see how everyone takes this news. I hope however it doesn't screw up your Natfie pairing.

As for other reviewers thinking that Nate is overpowered I don't agree with them, considering he has all the normal human limitations I think he is just powerful enough. And even if he does seem too strong sometimes I think it fits perfectly. He is an abnormality on this word so its normal genetic capabilities don't apply. Keep up what your doing, I really like how unique Nate is and I can't wait to see how you further develop his abilities and personality as he has really come a long way compared to how he was in chapter 1 :).

Anyways I can't wait for more, I'm looking forward to chapter 38.
Narwhale1 5/23/12 . chapter 37
There are many authors on this website that write novels like this, but never see through to it all. I'm glad you're still sticking to this despite the other things that keep you busy in your life, and I applaud you for it.

If only you could have put in more details when Nate finally explains himself to the group. It would have built more suspense and been more dramatic. Small example "I knew that what I would say now would make or break everything." Not the greatest example, but something like that. A little more description and details, and this chapter will be complete!

But I praise you in your commitment to this story after all this time. Please do not give up, and keep up the good work! Good tidings!
That's Professor Hawke 5/23/12 . chapter 37
Blasted cliffhanger. That said, I think "nearly every detail" is overstating it a bit. Nate does know everything from the games, but when you look at the grand scheme of things, we only see a small slice of each character's lifespan over the course of Before Crisis, Crisis Core, FF7, Advent Children, and Dirge of Cerberus. That leaves a lot of random details that he wouldn't know. It would be best if he re-worded that so they wouldn't think he could answer any random question about what they did on their thirteenth birthdays or anything.
Anon 5/23/12 . chapter 37
Hard to explain something like

That. I believe the easiest way to explain is to mention it as reading a book and then suddenly being inside the book. Everyone has reads book after all. Anyways great update and I hope you update soon
ReaderInWithdrawl 5/23/12 . chapter 36
ME NEEDS MY PRECIOUS! GIVE ME MY PRECIOUS! PRECIOUS! ...precious T_T
Demon2Angel 5/21/12 . chapter 36
This story is awesome I love it so much I can't wait until the next chapter I really like this story I want to read more
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