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lsass.exe 3/1/12 . chapter 1
very nice and cool little story. I enjoyed it very much.
Redline57 12/14/11 . chapter 1
This was awesome. Nice job, great story!
uberwrite 12/8/11 . chapter 1
I love the way you portrayed Ron in this, and your overall writing style is really good. The whole wardrobe malfunction thing was a nice touch, and the characters seemed to be in character enough for me.
ShegoK 12/1/11 . chapter 1
First KiGo one-shot I have ever read.

Laughed so much. Funny and sexy at the same time.

Totally worth it ;)
Kenneth Black 9/25/11 . chapter 1
*laughs* I enjoyed this so much. XD The fleshed-out plot was good, and Ron was actually mature for his age! 0.o *grin* Nice characterization of Shego and her predicament, and the whole thing is just humorous and smooth with Kim getting her date after her lovely confession. Great job, love your avatar. XD
StarvingLunatic 9/14/11 . chapter 1
You sure you haven't done this before? This was an entertaining story. Got quite a few chuckles out of me, especially Shego losing the front of her suit and Kim commenting on her nipples. Never would have thought that! I thought Summer Gale would have had a bigger role and done more in the story, but Shego showing up stole the story anyway. Oh, and Kim's comments about Drakken liking DNAmy - priceless! Well, this was a pleasant ride. Thanks for writing it. _
Texan Red Rose 9/6/11 . chapter 1
This is made of win! _ Loved it; funny and sexy go wonderfully together!

I shall also join the group with chanting "MOAR!". Would love to see Dr. D's reaction to Shego walking into the lair like that; guy might have a nosebleed/heart attack, but I think seeing the date would be more win.

Even if you don't wish to continue this particular story line, WRITE MORE PLEASE!

-TRR
AliceLife 9/2/11 . chapter 1
haha that was awesome. kim taking command. i like it :D
Demonhedgehog 9/1/11 . chapter 1
Yay! It's finally up! I like how you got Kim to make the first move without changing Shego's cheekiness. Can you make a sequel of the first date? It would make me happy...
Darkshadow-lord 9/1/11 . chapter 1
Great One-shot! I really enjoyed reading it!
Up In Arms100 8/31/11 . chapter 1
This DEMANDS a sequel! In fact so do I, so PLEASE write more!

And Inlove how badass Ron is and the whole "magician" thing made me laugh.

Personally I think Summer Gale is evil with a capital bleh. I think it would be fairly funny though if she saw them on their date or something, and her trying to follow them or something. That's just my idea anyway...more soon please! :D
Honulicious 8/31/11 . chapter 1
haa haa this was fun to read! i almost thought summer gale was shego in the beginnng..

also didn't think that zip it was regarding wardrobe...

write somemore!
longnite 8/31/11 . chapter 1
This was a lot of fun and so well put together. You had to love the set up and how these two played off each other. This story begs to be continued...that date would certainly be HOT! Great story and very well played! ;)
IdrewAcow 8/31/11 . chapter 1
This is a ridiculously great story! Loved it right o the end 3
RyanLeigh 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Haha love it; you have got to write a squeal :)
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