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Funkywatermelon 8/31/11 . chapter 1
SOOO Cute!

There is NOT enough Melman/Gloria stuff on here.

The grammar and such could use a little bit of work but overall, The content was TOP NOTCH!

Good job explaining how Melman got the toast for Gloria.

Keep up the great work!
I hope to see more from you soon!
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