|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| LibraryLady08 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Very, very nicely done!
| Nicffwhisperer 8/31/11 . chapter 1
love love love this.
| lala43 8/31/11 . chapter 1
See ... this is why I have you on my Alerts. This one shot was graceful and beautiful and sweet and deep and ... did I miss an adjective in there somewhere?
| 1853kaz 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Just lovely. I will have to read Jandco's now, if it's "better" than this! Only teasing. It is always such a pleasure to get an email alert from you. Thank you! :)
| yogacat 8/31/11 . chapter 1
that was beautiful?
I didn't read any entries or vote cause I was trying to write and I didn't finish in time. IKR? total fail.
If I had read I would have voted for this. I'll try to write this without the word "love".
The structure of the story flowed so well...like snippets and peeks into their lives, kind of like they lived and how the stars appeared. Moments to remember.
| jamie.baker68gmail.com 8/31/11 . chapter 1
I loved it, i so miss ur writing, i hope u continue to write more
| Cullenosopy 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Excellent! I love the fact that she doesn't tell him her name until she decides that he is the one.
| roxiegirl 8/31/11 . chapter 1
That was lovely! So beautifully written! Perfect! Thank you so much.
| ssherrill115 8/31/11 . chapter 1
You are the most fantabulous ever. Everything you write makes music in my head. Even when it's just crabbin' about the crock pot ladies - or writing a beautiful one shot. You are the music that makes my heart happy.
| TessLouise 8/31/11 . chapter 1
I think I reviewed this back when the contest was still going on, but had to review again. I is SO lovely ... I have enjoyed this more than any fic I've read in a long time (and I read a shameful LOT of fic). Thank you for this.
| silverpieces 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Awwww. Where can I read the others?
| Marijee 8/31/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. I think Garrett was right...these two free souls found each other and found home. I loved the mystery surrounding Beautiful Girl and how drawn Edward was to her. He wanted her with him...but he let her be free and she found her way back. His star on her heart...her star on his pulse.
"Her mouth is full of me and my brain is dust and nothing but me and this Beautiful Girl matter." Loved this!
I always enjoy the way you pull me into the story with your characters. Thank you for writing.
| Nonita 8/31/11 . chapter 1
| Pinkerbelledust 8/31/11 . chapter 1
I was excited to see the alert, but actually I read this one. Still beautiful, complex but simple adoration. I liked yhe tone of this story. I also like fanfic Garrett.
Thanks for writing and sharing!
| rmcrms5 8/31/11 . chapter 1