i think this is really good but i think you should go into more detail of the characters like let us know a lil more about the background for the story i think its good just a lil more detail cuz i wanna know more before we just start reading like get into the lil bits of kaitlin and austins relationship and talk about who is rodney and why she and austin have an interest in going to hawaii of all places and do more chapters lol i wanna read more! :)

Sounds OK 2 me! :) update soon? Sorry if the review is short but not really enough 2 review

You should continue

I love this story! I hope you keep going. Update soon!

Ahh! I already love it! All the other fanfictions for this series is either not about kaitlin, AU, or shes pregnant. I'm so happy you wrote this and its amazing! Please update soon!