Excellent. I love how you portrayed Luna.

I love this oneshot Luna is my favourite character!

I love the concept of this story, how you have shown that her belief is her identity and without it she would be lost and yet the one thing of importance to her leads to her isolation. You have done a beautiful job of portraying her emotions, something I dont think the real books really explored in alot of detail or did justice.

good! and i love luna for who she is:)

Poor Luna! Why can't everybody just accept her the way she is? It's so sad!

You did a great job capturing the angst! :D