Aw, that was so romantic, yet angsty and worrying at the end... why is there no sequel or conclusion to it? I could really see Palpy trying to twist Anakin by drugging him like that And, of course, what a lovely gift to Padme from Ani's part
Very good job; please finish it soon!

GREAT STORY MORE PLEASE!

Great. Keep righting storys.

I like this! You have excellent vision! Do I sense a sequel in the future or what?

Another great story. You need to write faster. A story posted every day will suffice.

Wow, that was fab. Definitely my favorite yet of your stories. It seemed...mature, somehow, like there was real feeling and not snippets of emotion. WELL DONE!

I *loved* the story.

Very Very Cool. wonderful just like your other ones this one just a hint different Anakin going nuts was well written!

I really liked the mysterious overtones, how you never quite pointed the finger at the *person at fault*.

groovy story!

I've read a lot of Star Wars fanfic, but this one is one of my favorite.

I love all your writing. It's wonderful!

Could we possibly get a little Obi-Wan/Amidala romance in here?

Bring out the Pulizter for Superninja-again! The only thing that I didn't find to my liking was the line "Snap out of it man!". That's not exactually Star Warsish. But other than that, it was really good!

It was good, but some of the dialogue was a little hard for me to digest. And I absolutely CANNOT see the Obi-Wan/Amidala romance. I personally don't like it. The gift idea's were good. Others my have loved the story, but it just didn't sit right with me. But the writting style was good.