Like a fool, I never left a review for this story the first time I read it. So, I'm leaving one now.
Reading this story was like seeing an episode of UC an episode I WISH they had shown. You have the characters down pat and your original characters (Shay, especially) are so well rounded I feel I have met them. They live and breathe for me. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

This was great! I'm glad to see you've already started the sequel.

Excellent. I'm glad that I waited until it was completed to read the whole thing. It would have made me crazy to have to wait for the next installment. Please keep it up. I have nothing but the utmost respect for people who can tell a story well.

Thank you.

Waaahhhhhh! Sniffle. Poor Frank. There's gonna be a sequel, right?

Way Hey do I smell a sequel brewing? Hope so

Juli

I hope there will be an explanation. Why did she leave like that?

Oh HUH UH! :Gets up and stomps around: I demand a rewrite! This...that...just not right man! C'mooonn! Cut the hot man a break. Great story though. :frowns at the ending again, but decides to suck it up: I really liked it. Sequel maybe?)

Awww! She left! *waaaa! sniff sniff Deana

Great finish, I hope Shay/Fallon will be back.

ACK! NOOOOOO! NO NO NO NO NO! How cruel you are to Frank!

I am out of kleenix than you very much!

Kha

Frank's awake! YAY! WOO HOO! lol post more! Deana

Geesh, Cody is a bottomlessp pit when it comes to food...

perky beer and pizza... I'll have dinner with him if Fallon won't!

Thank Goodness, I love this story, and I have to agree with you about Deana, she is awesome.

Ah! lol nice interaction between the characters)