|Reviews for Brothers United|
| FreakyPotterhead 9/10/12 . chapter 2
O.O THAT MADE ME LAUGH SO FUCKING HARD! xD
I'd almost forgotten how awesome you are, so thanks for reminding me! *-*
| Advent of Shadows 4/23/12 . chapter 7
Well written story, but I disliked both of the endings. I hated his decision to leave Ginny, even if only for a year or so, in order to do other things. He should have stayed with her. After all, he beat Voldemort. It shouldn't be his job to solve everyone's problems.
| smkffnut 10/13/11 . chapter 7
Well, I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I liked both your final chapters. If I had to choose, I'd pick the first one, though. I hate to think of three long years of Harry without Ginny. Thanks for letting us see your alternate ending! I did enjoy this story, but would have liked to see more of the interaction between Harry and Draco? Are they mates, now? Also loved Ron's line about dresses...poor guys just don't get weddings. Thanks for writing!
| Stephanie O 10/10/11 . chapter 7
At first I was going to say that I liked the first ending better, but now I'm torn...I don't like that Harry & Ginny had all that time apart from each other, but I'm so glad they still had their happy ending! Loved Harry's reaction to his coin - just announcing he had a date - and the way they kissed right away that night! (No more wasting time!)
Btw, 'Holyside Harpies' should be 'Holyhead Harpies'.
| Stephanie O 10/10/11 . chapter 5
Loved the part about adding Harry to the Weasleys' clock - very sweet! :)
Ginerva should be Ginevra.
"Ascio, Splinter" [Accio]
What is the "project" or arrangement between Harry & Draco? Very mysterious...
| Stephanie O 10/10/11 . chapter 3
The Weasleys had held a memorial service for Bill about a week later. [I believe you meant Fred?]
I wonder if there's a way to undo the Vow? Is that why they were summoned to McGonagall's office?
| Stephanie O 10/10/11 . chapter 1
Ooh wow, love the ending on this - I guess I shouldn't put ANYTHING past the Weasley boys! lol :D
| Fierce One 9/26/11 . chapter 6
Malfoy did identify Ron anD Hermione in malfoy manor. At first he said no but then at the end he said yes.
| smkffnut 9/14/11 . chapter 6
I'm not sure what all you changed, but I have rarely seen a fic draw this much heat from reviewers! I thought it was a great story, although I was relieved that the Weasley Boys didn't really make an Unbreakable Vow with poor Harry... I would love more about this next mission with Draco, so I hope this is not the end. Thanks for writing!
| cascol3 9/12/11 . chapter 5
I would like to know what is going on with Kingsley. Draco's actions really were a surprise. I can't wait to know what they are up to.
| OakStone730 9/12/11 . chapter 2
keeper - ugh,I've been doing that bill/fred thing the whole time. I thought I had caught all the mistakes. But obviously not. I'll correct tonight.
| keeperoliver 9/12/11 . chapter 5
Hey Stoney. Got a minor gripe. Twice you have had Bill being the one that died during the war, and twice you had him show up alive later in the chapter. I don't feel so bad about my mistakes now. LoL. Great chapter, and not at all too long. It told us a lot. Hopefully Harry can now be nightmare free. Ginny still doesn't act like she wants to get back with Harry. She didn't even want to acknowledge him as a brother, but is willing to because of her family. Hope to hear what this plan is soon. As always, Ollie the Keeper.
| OakStone730 9/12/11 . chapter 1
Blindside - it was just a peck of a kiss! from someone who has known Harry for 7 years, who is worried about him and was done as in the form of a "good morning, I hope you don't die today" kind of concern for Harry. Ron was right there, and she gave him a proper girlfriend-good morning kiss.
| Blindside 9/12/11 . chapter 5
Now Hermione is kissing Harry and Ron's supposed to be okay with that?
| Guest 9/12/11 . chapter 5
Ginny really went off and had sex with a racist bigot just to get back at Harry. And she claims she "couldn't" get away to visit him in the hospital fir FOUR days? Neither of your characters are mature but Ginny is disgusting at this point because she choose the most repugnant person at school and actually cozied (probably even shagged) him and didn't give a rat 's arse that Harry was in the hospital. She isn't ready for a relationship and neither is Harry but at least he doesn 't debase himself with Death Eater bigoted assholes.