 evil-mastermind666 2007-01-03 . chapter 7Effing Calculated Risks! I agree with Filch; Gryffindor recklessness and Slytherin cleverness seem to end the same way: in the Hospital Wing. |
 evil-mastermind666 2007-01-03 . chapter 4Jesus H. Christ, must you torture awesome characters?
"(Evil? Moi?)" - Yes, you! :P
I think Minnie and Argus would be cute, though I'm a bigger fan of her and Dumbledore. |
 evil-mastermind666 2007-01-03 . chapter 1Oh sweet Merlin, the poor child!
I can't wait for "Snuffles/Padfoot" to become Sirius... hehe, I can't imagine Argus' reaction, but I know it'll be memorable and hilarious. |
 duj 2004-04-24 . chapter 7 Haha. Snape and black together is always a fun combination. I like a multi-dimensional Lucius too. |
 Calandra Facete 2003-04-24 . chapter 7The open hostility between Sirius and Snape is perfect, having one or both of them drugged really is the only way to keep the peace in the hospital wing. I like reading the Squib series because it gives a different perspective of the Hogwarts world not to mention a really interesting dynamic character. Filch is beginning to come out of his shell more because of the kindness of Neville and Ginny which is good. I guess that his bad experience with wizards has made his somewhat distrustful. Luckly I don't think that Callandra (with 2 l's) will suffer the same fate. I'm really interested to see how this romance between Neville and her plays out. |
 Tinuwen 2003-01-06 . chapter 7So wonderful...so wonderful!! |
 Tinuwen 2003-01-06 . chapter 6Will Rita have another mirror? Except better? This is really good! GO SQUIBS! |
 Aeryn Alexander 2002-11-30 . chapter 7Another excellent story! I liked the bit about Fawkes in the epilogue. And Neville finding a girlfriend! How sweet! |
 Andolyn 2002-05-16 . chapter 6 My appologies for not reviewing every chapter, but I simply could not stop reading!
Wonderful story, masterfully written and quite dark in some places.
Bravo! |
 Andolyn 2002-05-16 . chapter 4 Wow-
This tory paints all the characters at their best.
Thank you. |
 K. Cloak 2002-05-09 . chapter 7Very nice! It was interesting to see the interaction between Snape, Sirius and Filch. And I can't stop thinking that Madam Pomfrey simply poked one of Severus's bruises when she said "I'll be the judge of that." (Severus's yelps of "Ow!" had me laughing out loud...) It was a nice, humorous ending to a more serious story. |
 Lataradk 2002-05-05 . chapter 7 How did I manage to miss the epilouge? I'm sorry! It wasn't untill I'd read A Squib's Proper Place I reliazed that I was missing out on something.
Anyway, it was a really funny end! Poor Snape. Fawkes should be happy the Potions master was too ill to hunt him down and serve him stuffed at Thanksgiving. Harry overhearing the conversation would have done it. Let's all praise the wizard/witch who invented sleeping potions ;) |
 ThePet 2002-05-03 . chapter 7Just when I thought this one was ended, you make my day by adding another lovely scene :-) More soon, I hope! Good luck with the next one! |
 Ariana Deralte 2002-05-03 . chapter 7hehe. I can just see Fawkes doing that, and Snape grumpily pushing the bird away as it tries to cry for him...and Dumbledore looking concerned but very amused. I don't know where it happened, but Dumbledore is fast approaching snape as my favourite character...well, except for Uric:) Such a sweet little epilogue. Can't wait to see more, well more of everyone. I honestly love the way you write everyone:) Cheers. |
 melodie 2002-05-02 . chapter 7 you don't have to make them friends just like have them a mutual respect for each other. siruis respects severus for being a spy on the good side and risting his life, and severus respects siruis for surviving alabaz for almost twelve years. their so much alike. both have black hair, tall, smart. it's almost like their brothers. |