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| GuesssWho 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abuseTasty . . . :) |
| Morbid724 2003-01-09 ch 25, | abuseAww...shucks...Sussie HAAAAAAAADDDD a boyfriend...:) LOL Nice twist, Kurt. Morbid |
| Morbid724 2003-01-09 ch 16, | abuseOh...the horrific trahma...That was disgracful Kurt! ARG! ARG! ARG! ACK. ACK ACK...EBIIIILLL EBIIIIIIIILLL...AWFULNESS...DIRTINESS...FOULNESS...oh wait...I mean foulness in the extreme...That WAS GroSS...She's contaminated...poor Lisa...poor Lisa...The horrible tounge of DEATH!! BAD BAD BAD...She's gotta have things GROWING in her mouth NOW. I mean even him kissing SUSANA was gross...but this...I HIGHLY doubt I'll sleep tonight...*nightmare* SCARY!! -Morbid... P.S. About the Sussie/Luke Relationship, can you see Dr. Lecter coming out of his house holding a shot gun fixed on Luke...heh heh...SUSSIE'S GOTTA BOYYYYYYFRRRRRRRRIEEEEENDDDDD..hehehehehhheeehee |
| Morbid724 2003-01-08 ch 13, | abusewait...how the heck do you know what the "just-us-girls" tone sounds like? HEH HEH HEH HEH. . . . lol That was real pleasant...interesting way to kill and torture someone...where'd you get that idea? Nice, Morbid |
| Morbid724 2003-01-06 ch 11, | abuseWhoa! Great chappie! A 90 year old Will Graham! hehehe....hehehe... I hope it's an exageration that Sussie wants to kill all the lecterphiles...until she's 80. heh... I liked this one. Morb. |
| Morbid724 2002-12-20 ch 9, | abuseKurt, you have some sort of sick obsession with the Girl Scouts...I've read about 5 of your stories and out of them I've heard somewhere around 3 references to the "Girl Guides"...That creepy... *Morbid* |
| Morbid724 2002-12-06 ch 5, | abuseOkay...so maybe NOT Clarice, damn, I thought that would be...kinda nice, but of CORSE not, Kurt, no decent motherly type reunion! Susana doesn't feel much of anything anymore, does she, I mean, I thought she might still need healing from her mother's death. But, maybe not, I mean she did just drive around when she'd just been kidnapped by the Skinner in 'Whoever Fights Monsters' Another...twisted chapter... Morbid |
| Morbid724 2002-12-06 ch 4, | abuseYou're making me skeptical about Clarice being dead from this whole accomplice thing, if she is, you REALLY scared me there for a minute! I thought it was actually pretty interesting of Susana not to kill McNeely. It's very unlike her, maybe she isn't THAT horribly too bad...I'm not letting my guard down though, it's too risky! Great job, Morbid |
| Morbid724 2002-12-06 ch 3, | abuseHi, Humm...If I'm allowed to be brutal, this is going to be another long review. I feel for Susana in this story, because of the loss of Clarice, but I think she still needs to make amends for all the people she's killed. I'm sure some of the people she killed were mothers too, or at least family, who probably suffered (not by imprisonment but pain, suffering...ect). The same feelings that Susana caused and she's feeling now. And if I remember correctly Lisa saved Susana from Ardelia first. I am not cold hearted, so this is giving me mixed feelings for Susana, I'm not totally unsympathetic to Susana because I knew who Clarice was. On the other hand, you can't justify killing 17 people (probably more). You just can't do it, but then you can't just deny sympathy with Susana for the loss of her mother. To do so would be cruel. I have mixed feelings, and I'm not going to choose one or the other. Good or bad. It's somewhere in between. Rock bottom? You're exaggerating; she's about 50 feet below rock bottom. Still amazing work! ~Morbid~ |
| Screaming Lamb 2002-08-19 ch 28, | abuseKurt! Sorry I'm late catching up on my reading -DR LESAGE?!!! OMIGOD! What can I say - I'm honoured! :-) Thank you for making a happy ending - now what will little Guillaume become when he's old enough to hold a harpy?! :-) |
| chameleon302 2002-08-18 ch 28, | abusei am completely floored...the last "gotcha" bit was a nice touch. a stunning tale from start to finish! you could leave them there or have them become "partners" on some venture with The little boy..oh btw... WILL FREAKIN GRAHAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *manical laughter* a very very very very very very very very clever move of you!! great work...just like every story you've done!! BRAVO |
| chameleon302 2002-08-18 ch 27, | abuseok that whole chapter was a bit mind blowing...got the real feel of the last part of hannibal the book way to go kurt you twisted "b" |
| LoT (Still not over "playth... 2002-08-17 ch 28, anon. | abuseAt least my rage has settled a little more now. It's wierd now....It's all over, I'm going to miss it alot. Something tell's me Sussana will be back on the scene again ...Will though...*shakes head* Did NOT see that one comming. Excellent work. Every chapter was worth it. |
| Steel 2002-08-16 ch 28, | abuseI knew Will still had it in him, or out of him LOL! That was truly a shocker and not expected Kurt. I liked the end, that was great! Letting Lisa finally win one. Too Kool Kurt! Thanks again. Steel- |
| That Sam ady who keeps runn... 2002-08-15 ch 28, anon. | abuseKuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrt! To put it lightly, what the F***?! OMG! Completely a surprise! I'm still debating whether to scream loudly over what you did, or cheer loudly. (Since we know my opinion of Will.) Things I did not need to know about... ummm.. forms of conception, but... Never thought Susie had something like that in her. nice job, BTW. |