|Reviews for Body Language|
| Chiwowwow2 6/17/13 . chapter 24
You probably get sick of me saying it but I really enjoy the way you write Blair. She's not as wicked as people think she is and you show it well. Interesting choice to replace her role in the diet with Nancy...
| Ltlconf 6/16/13 . chapter 24
Nice to see things from Natalie's PoV. I liked the the change of pace and you really have two very difference voices her. Molly is analytical, very black and white, wry, idealistic, and seems to have a running commentary going at all times. In other words, a typical intellectual (I outa know!).
Natalie is laid-back yet factual and adds little to the story but what was said and done. Sure an opinion peaks out now and then, but not to often. In other words, very old-school reporter in style.
And good bit at the end, very much in the vein of the show. You need humor in any FoL story!
Also seems we can't have too much go well for too long, hmmm? So dark clouds ahead it seems.
| ilovexmas 6/4/13 . chapter 23
I really loved your story (as usual) and i'm so glad you showed BLAIR's soft and sensible side, as well as MOLLY's heart to heart talk with her...
I am really wondering how many more chapters you've got, and how it will end lol i surely hope you will have a happy ending for everyone (aka BLAIR making up with CINDY)!
Look forward to reading more soon!
| Chiwowwow2 5/26/13 . chapter 23
I have to say first of all that I'm so amused by how similar our stories are. It's the little details that crack me up because they're not intentional and sometimes totally by chance. I already wrote Jo playing Mattel football in my next chapter...which now I might change. lol
Your Cindy always leaves me conflicted. Her smile after Sue Ann got home made it seem like she was happier to see Sue Ann heartbroken and single than to see Sue Ann happy with someone else. Idk. I guess that's normal when you like someone but it seems a little selfish. Loved your Blair/Molly scene though. Relenting Blair is my favorite, and it sounds like Molly has matured.
| Ltlconf 5/25/13 . chapter 23
Glad to see this back and running. A very good showing and good job on making Blair both sympathetic and logical. Too the point of having her fears make sense and that she, well, has a point! While Cindy may not care about exposure or being kicked out of school, others do have alot to lose and parents who may not be so forgiving. It's not black and white, and rarely ever is.
| twin who likes to travel 5/25/13 . chapter 23
I might be wrong but wasn't Scott's last name Dunbar and not Thurman? I know people don't use proper grammar all of the time, but wasn't Molly supposed be smart enough to know that she should have been saying I instead of me when she was talking sometimes? I can imagine Cindy having a dream simply because of the kiss she got from Sue Ann at the end. I'm curious to see how far yo take the possible dream though. As for the rest of this update, it's was the second light to my day. The other being having lucky on one of the game apps on Facebook.
| katyperry16 5/25/13 . chapter 23
Omg love this chapter!
| ilovexmas 5/9/13 . chapter 22
Highly entertaining chapter as usual and i just couldn't believe CINDY kissed BLAIR (i forgot to mention it on the previous chapter) but i'm surely glad to see MOLLY coming to her senses by stopping NAT from humiliating the 'debutante' in publishing the tape!
In a way in your story i feel that MOLLY is the main character since you always seem to write from her point of view, right? That's cool cos i never read a FOL with her as the main one before...
CINDY vs BLAIR have a different kind of relationship as the one JO had with the 'debutante' (JO had a 'love hate' relationship whereas CINDY just feels hate toward BLAIR and you can feel their loathe toward each other).
I'm always on the 'debutante's' side as you know and look forward to more!
| twin who likes to travel 5/4/13 . chapter 22
It's nice to see an update to this story. When I got to the part where they began to find out that Mary-Beth/Denise was lying, I thought Blair was behind it, or maybe one of the bigoted girls at Eastland. They would us her to get Cindy to come out more and then get her thrown out.. I'm happy that I was wrong though. I wonder what's going to happen next.
| katyperry16 5/4/13 . chapter 22
awe this chapter made me sad :( But I love this story! :)
| Chiwowwow2 5/4/13 . chapter 22
That was quite a lot to take in. Poor Cindy. It was good to see more of Sue Ann. I love how protective she got. That part where she took charge and tricked Nancy into getting off the phone while also causing her get mad at Roger cracked me up. Very in-character.
I'm still a little confused about Blair to be honest. So... She knows she's gay and she has a girlfriend of sorts with whom she does very gay things. Regardless of whether or not she is secretive about her sexuality (which she really isn't at this point), she is doing the exact same things as Cindy so why does she continue to insult Cindy for being a lesbian? It's like she's insulting herself.
| Chiwowwow2 4/8/13 . chapter 21
I'm not very fond of any of the characters right now. Hopefully they'll refrain from attacking each other for a little while and give this whole "force Blair out of the closet" charade a break. If she's receiving psychotherapy, does that mean her parents know?
| twin who likes to travel 4/7/13 . chapter 21
This was a really good chapter. Even though I understand the girls being curious, it was definitely wrong to invade Blair's privacy. It was just as wrong though for Blair to use those slurs while talking about Cindy in her diary. As for the Miss Piggy topic, wasn't Molly, Cindy, and Natalie referring to how Blair acts like her and not about weight? If that's right, shouldn't they have told Blair that? I kind of agree with Blair calling them out on the hypocrisy. And I also liked how Molly defended Cindy in front of Greg. I did feel slightly bad for Greg being used like that
| ilovexmas 4/7/13 . chapter 21
Wao that was your best one so far!
I love it how BLAIR takes revenge on those 3 nasty girls (i never liked CINDY and MOLLY anyway) but i'm surprised at NATALIE's naughtiness: she's usually her friend in the series, although we know TOOTIE is her very best friend!
I am with on the debutante's side, but i wish JO was the one instead of TUMPY lol!
PS: i'm a big fun of WONDER WOMAN too!
This is getting better and better so congratulations and hope to read more of this fascinating story!
Like your style too and i always found season 1 very entertaining!
| Chiwowwow2 3/20/13 . chapter 20
Oh boy. I'm anxious to see what they got her. Unexpected low blow from Molly. Bad ally. Bad. On one hand it bothers me that she is partaking in mocking Blair for being closeted (even if Blair IS bullying Cindy) but on the other hand it isn't out of character for her to be insensitive. Molly wasn't known for her careful word choice. Cindy, I understand, because she probably sees what she's doing as retribution. Blair is resilient so I don't see this affecting her very much but that kind of "jibing" can really get to a person.