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music nimf 12/4/11 . chapter 1
I just got done reading all of this verse. Very satisfying. I thought that the interaction of the younger brothers was golden. Then you put Dick and Jason together and it was magical. They fight like, well, brothers I suppose and I loved it. I don't think that I would have objected to seeing them actually come to blows, it was so satisfying. Also, I think Dick was the only one that called him Jay. I thought that was a nice touch. I'm sure that Jason would not care much for Slade, to put it mildly. He's scum and just The way he affects Dick gives me the creeps and I'm not his vengeful brother. I love everything Donna. The Amazons are kind of my favorite. And Babs, so much love forever.
Lil DragonLex 11/2/11 . chapter 1
Aw. Donna and Jason. And I loved the interactions with Jason and Bruce. I can't get enough of Jason calling him Dad. It would be great if you could do another Father's Day story with both Damian and Jason trying to get gifts for Bruce. I absolutely adore your Wayne Brothers fics.
cm27815 10/1/11 . chapter 1
This was a good one. I liked the inclusion of Donna. One thing though: World War III already happened in the comics with Black Adam. Dick should have been worried about World War IV with Tim and Damian. Also, I thought they were getting along better. Why the glares and fights now?
Reagan 10/1/11 . chapter 1
I didn't even know you wrote another story and yay I found it. I love, love, love that Bruce takes the time to help Jason though his issues. God knows that kid needs a shrink. Bruce is a nice stand-in. Good for Dick to try and take him out to use Jason's knowledge. Too bad things fell apart with Harper and the dealer.

I love this series and your current one so I'll just say update whichever one you want whenever you can. Thanks.
ethuil 9/29/11 . chapter 1
awwwww... the ending was sweet! anyway, really good story)
Lupegarou4488 9/24/11 . chapter 1
I love this series! Especially how Jason interacts with everyone and his feelings as he interacts with them. I hope that you continue with the one shots. Also, I was wondering about Deathstroke are you going to elaborate on that in other chapters?
Dedicatedfollower467 9/7/11 . chapter 1
Awwwww I kinda wanted more Dick/Jason bonding. Mostly because Dick is my favorite Batman character.

But this was a GREAT story. Loved it. I love your Jason. I want to pull him into my arms and cuddle him. I love how realistically you deal with his guilt and his anger. It comes off really well; I love it.
ShinobuSaiga 9/5/11 . chapter 1
LOL. Jay is going to get teased about Donna for a while. Although considering how gun-shy (no pun intended) he is of relationships in general, maybe only subtly...

I do enjoy this series and I can't help wondering how Jason will deal with a non-Red Hood project and I am still wondering about the case and what Deathstroke was doing?
Kimmydoll 9/4/11 . chapter 1
ugh you r so good at writing the wayne family! love you Donna and Jason! they r so cute together! I love this one-shot...though i wished you do more! lol. luv your stories! awesome job!
Mutou Yasu 9/4/11 . chapter 1
Hehe. I love your Batman fics so much! This one was just as great as all the other ones. I love how you make Jason. This is really what his character should be. His heart is in the right place, still a bit confused, not yet perfect, but willing to do things right by the man who raised him. Simply beautiful.
The only problem I had with this story was Roy. It's one of those touchy subjects that I don't like being brought up. I'm glad you associated his problems with the death of Lian, but again, I'm still upset with DC for doing that to him (and her). In any case, I still loved the story, and I can see why you did what you did. Just because I'm upset with what DC did (and I'm a little miffed that they made him an anti-hero instead of fixing him in the reboot), doesn't mean you can't do whatever you want. It's still your story and it is about the Bat family, not Roy, so it's all good.
Anyway, I really hope to see more of these little Bat family one shots. They always make my day whenever I read them. _
lizzysarai 9/3/11 . chapter 1
You make life better.
Your stories are keeping me in the fandom, making the changes DCs dishing out just a little bit more bearable.

Seriously this is a very good fic. Apart from all the things that you do so well; like your characterization, the dialogue and interaction between the characters that is just so spot on and sincer, it gives the feeling and life and color throughout the whole fic, even when a characters' scene is short it is well explained and nicely handled. Its very down to earth and makes them be so likable and wonderful without ever losing their true characters.

And then it's the storie and all the different levels of emotion that it has, it's a straight forward story, but then theirs the underlining of all this other problems and the demons of each character. Like with Dick and Slade, I was actually thrown for a loop when I read it because it just digs deeper into a different story, into Dick's mind and it opens a whole different can of emotions that are just begging to be used. And then Roy, oh dear t broke my heart! Poor poor Roy! And Jason and him have such anger(?) towards each other, it just dwells more into their characters, making them human.

Btw your totally makin me a Donna/Jay fangirl, they are so cute! And it would be sub a sweet relationship.

Then with Bruce and Jason, how a father would reason with their child, and Jason coming into this comfortable zone is just so so good! It's nice and we see character development. Now we've seen what Dick means during 'Mothers day' when he's having a conversation with Jason, the relationship between Jason and Bruce brings closure and it's like the start of something new.

As always great job! And keep on writing, don't let work stress you out too much, and thanks for sharing it.
Pan Elric-san 9/3/11 . chapter 1
"Hey, Jason, guess where we're going!"Oh my gosh, where?" For good measure his brother threw in a ridiculous valley girl accent."Staaaar City!" It came out like a game show host's announcement.

For a split second, Jason scowled, but continued the charade. "Holy shit, Batman!
IT MADE MY DAY FOREVER!
NiffStral 9/3/11 . chapter 1
This one shots are so incredibly amazing! I didn't expect another at all, so you have no idea how excited I was to see one. Keep 'em up!
babygirlalexismchotmail.com 9/2/11 . chapter 1
Yaaaaay! I had no idea you were going to make another one-shot! Sweet and flawless with the characters, as always! And to think I was just about to reread your other ones when I saw this at the top of the page. I guess that's a testament to how much I love your work! As always, keep up the great work!

Oh, and I'm guessing you got the general idea for Jason's new "costume" from his appearance in Red Hood and the Outlaws, right? I personally can't wait to see how his character is going to be further developed!
Kick-Aft 9/2/11 . chapter 1
Loved this.
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