Hey,

I don't review that much (if ever...) but I can't go away here that easily.

I really, really, really liked your story. It was so very honest, you described this journey very well, the development of the characters was realistic and believable.
I enjoyed reading this story very much!

Thank you!

Wow absolutely loved this story xxx I only wish that there was a sequel (hint hint) never read a jasper/bella story before but you've completely turned (!) me xxx

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I've really enjoyed this story. I love how you brought the vampires and the wolves together, it made it seem like the natural thing to do under the circumstances. I also love the fact that you incorporated Bree into the Cullen family. I hope that you will consider doing a sequel to this story. It would be nice to hear about Emmett,Rosalie,Jasper,and Bella's roadtrip and find out whether or not they went to see Peter and Charlotte.

It would also be nice ti find out more about Bree and how she is adapting to living with Carlisle and Esme and whether or not they ever find her friend Fred.

Cool story, thanks for sharing. I can imagine a sequal in which Bree and Edward end up togeather.

Well done... I would like to see one chapter ten years/five years from now.

I like how you referenced his comfort as light in her.

I always hate seeing Charlie hurt. I hope they find some small way to communicate.

The part with Billy at the end was perfect... well done.

What a sad goodbye.

How sad...

I do feel like I have started reading this before but I must not have since I am able to leave a review.
Nice start. I will try to review often.

I really liked this story. It was one of my favorite Bella/jasper fics

This was an absolutely fantastic story. It was so well written that I would deem it professional. You need to be proud of your work and truly pursue writing. Please know that I loved the story and your effort and time is so appreciated. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading your work.

i really liked your story its super awesome but the only thing i could find for you to fix is to tell the readers who's POV you are writing in not to make us try and figure it out on our own it makes the story harder to get in to. but other than that i LOVE the story you are a fantastic writer and yah good work