|Reviews for Awake and Alive|
| LuluCalliope 9/11/12 . chapter 1
Wow! This is really great! I haven't seen Rango in FOREVER, but I always loved Rattlesnake Jake. I don't care if other people think that Adina is a Mary Sue, I complete forgive the Mary Sue-ish traits she may display.
Personally, I don't think she's a Mary Sue. She's got a lot of personality. She's skeptical, wry, and cautious.
| Shen's General 8/14/12 . chapter 30
Hey, it's me...Interested...I have recently gotten an account and now go by the name Shen's General! I had read this story and I loved it, a lot. The scenes with Jake and Adina was very nice and I hope you make more of this couple, please.
| Interested 8/8/12 . chapter 13
Me: SON OF A BITCH!
Chef: SON OF A BITCH!
Cartman: SON OF A BITCH!
Kludd: SON OF A BITCH!
Bender: SON OF A BITCH!
(Everyone stares at Butters, expecting him to say something...)
Butters: What? I just (BLEEP!) my pants seeing this.
Cartman: Is this what we had to look forward to in our future reviews, living in constant fear of a singluar snake?
Me: Hey now, as long as we don't piss him off (glares at Cartman and Bender), we'll be good, I think this character will be good for the gang, and best of all, Maddohatta won't send him away to gods knows where.
Chef: As long he's not racist, I'm good.
Me: Anyway, you are good at finding ways of pissing Jake off. I love how protective he is.
| Interested 8/8/12 . chapter 12
Started reading this fic (not really a fan of Rango, but I do like Rattlesnake Jake), and I find Jake's denial of love towards Adina quite touching...
Butters: Oh, Jake, you...
Cartman: (Singing Won't Said I in Love from Hercules)
Kludd: Ya know, I think we might have found a new member to join our group...
Bender: I don't know, I'm not comfortable with a snake that has a gatling gun for a tail-er-rattle!
Me: Too late Bender, I already forward a letter to him...
Bender: Aw geez...
(Meanwhile, in Mud)
(Rattlesnake Jake finds a letter and reads it)
Rattlesnake Jake: Hmmm...Dear Rattlesnake Jake, we are a gang who have been in need of a new member, since one of our friend had...bit the dust, and we will be happy if you would come to our hangout helping out with reviewing stories such as yours. Please consider joining us... Sincerely, Interested.../Shen's Follower/Brian's Wingman/A Bird Fanatic/A Wolf Fantic and co..
(Ponders the letter and then merely set it aside)
Rattlesnake Jake: Well well, sound like some folks took an interest in me, well, I am one of the infamous outlaw in these parts, well whoever ya are, I accept. (Slithers off towards our hangout)
| AnnoedFaceless 7/23/12 . chapter 29
Such an epic ending! :D "...F*ck." LOL
| ninjadragon5 7/22/12 . chapter 30
lol i loved the last line jake said in the last chapter. XD
hurry! the final chapter is up! perfect ending to a great story, i know i said it before but it is true. i really enjoyed reading this story. at first this story was like meh okay to me, but then it got better and better!
as for story ideas, the one where an old enemy of jake comes back and jake wants to leave for the safety of adina, i had the same idea! of course your story might a little different from mine, but i did have the same thoughts.
jake fighting zombies sounds like an awesome idea . also are going to create a story idea where jake and adina have kids? i know that sounds a bit cliche, but it would an awesome and funny idea on how jake deals with that.
| De 7/20/12 . chapter 29
The entire story was a pleasure to read. I remember you doing a kung fu panda story, bloody or blooming children (one of those); are you going to continue that? It was great start, and it would such a shame if it was left unfinished. You really have an excellent way of writing.
An avid fan
| Guest 7/20/12 . chapter 29
LOL! oh gods, i was laughing so hard XD and is jake now upset that wyatt's gonna get a lot of attention now? and omg, i'm so upset it's over Dx this is one of the best stories i've read! you better make more :0
| Athena Eudialyte Vewlpoer 7/20/12 . chapter 29
I am a bit sad that it's over, but I most say that was a perfect ending to a amazing story. I also wish to tell you that I'd love to read those drabbles you talked about.
| Guest 7/19/12 . chapter 29
Will you find someone for Wyatt? Oh, please tell me you're at least thinking about it! I love your story and I think you've got enough background built up to turn this into a nice little series.
| Hawken 7/18/12 . chapter 29
The story has been a very riveting and entertaining one, and I don't say that for very many, and I read a lot. With how the end is wrapping up here, I think it lines up well for a possible sequel down the road. if at all possible, I would love to see such happen, maybe with a bit of a twist to the tale now that Wyatt is alive.
| Guest 7/18/12 . chapter 29
This was BY FAR the best Rango fanfic I have EVER read! Hopefully, you'll continue this in the form of a sequel or drabbles. If you do, I'll read them!
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 28
Are you planning a sequel? Because I'd love to read it!
| hidansgirl1234 7/3/12 . chapter 28
| ninjadragon5 7/1/12 . chapter 28
oh my goddddd...i absolutely loved this last two chapters! a perfect ending battle scene for this story. glad to see adina give it her all to the eagle queen. and you said you can't write good, bah! couldn't of written a better story myself. well, i guess the story is at an end now, can't believe it is over, i enjoyed reading this story too much.