Very nice ending. There was not a mention of children and did not go too far advance into the future. It left a feeling of great hope and love.

Thank you for the lovely story. :D

your story was absolutely wonderful... I loved it and will miss it very badly.. Keep up the good work!

That fanfiction was so good! I am gutted that its over. When's the sequel? Haha I'm so excited already that you are writing one. Please upload it soon. And yes you were very Jane Austen in your style of the wedding but actually I really liked it that way it was more subtle. xx

Well done a very enjoyable read

Very well done!

That was awwww-dorable. can't wait to read the sequel.

intresting idea, lydia and kitty meeting col fitzwilliam. that could be fun. not lead anywhere, but fun stuff

Poor Mr. Bennet...I love to rrad more of the bet when Richard will find it..hopefully it would be amusing too?A sequel is rather nice,looking forward to it too...thanks for the update...

thank you for gifting us with some charles and jane story line :D

Awwwww great story. A really enjoyable read but I have to say it annoyed me whenever Elizabeth got refered to as 'Miss Bennett' as she is 'Miss Elizabeth' as she is not the eldest unmarried daughter. But update soon. I need to know how the rest of the story unfolds.

Haha! Col. Fitz loses the bet! I'm glad that they are so deliriously happy - all four of them! By all means, share your sequel as soon as may be.

I really like your plot concept, but I feel, so far, that your dialogue is weak. Aside from the direct quotes from BBC 1995, which seem a little forced into your story, the speech is a little lacking in reality, even Regency reality. The narration, the original scenes, and the thoughts expressed are much more fluid. I know I'm early into the piece, and late to the party, but I'm hoping that the originality of your concept inspires you to use your own originality when these beloved characters interact. Hope this isn't too harsh, believe, please, that I truly admire what you're doing and only wish to encourage you: I've been a selfish person all my life and I'm WAY past eight and twenty!

I am throughly enjoying your story. every now and then an author on fanfiction breaks the 'fouth wall'. Personaly, it pulls me out of the story and out of rhytmn of reading. 'Her view on the morning's visit was just as satisfactory as our hero's just a page ago'

i enjoyed the inner monolouge of darcy