woah! I love it so much!1 the chapter is amazing! I hope the next chapter comes soon!

Crescent

love the new chapter and i loove that shade nad fine found each other and i hope they can escape this alive and are able to destroy the evi; soon!

... Why you stop it? I need more!

Omg this chapter is so sad i want to cry! Everyone is leaving! Being separated! Noooooooo! I just hope everything turns out okay in the end.

i love the chapter and i hope fine can survive and shade can find fine in time and i hope this doesn't end badly in the end.I hope this has an happy find FIne!Update soon!

ShadexFine Forever!

Wow! That was exciting! I really can't wait to read what happens next! Update soon! -

amazing :)

Guy... I miss that fic and the new Ch was perfect ! I need more XD

Chapter 10 is really awkward but can u upload the next chapter. For some reason Shade seems like he turned into a really big pervert

One of my personal favorites. I've always been a FinexShade fan. Please complete

OWo guy... You have talent! Please do more of this fic (i'm totally loving this fic)

Who the hell is rainie!

WOW! really good, i love this story. It doesn't matter how short your chapters are, it only matters what you put in them, and this chapter is a great example. I love how their feelings are starting to mix up and they are starting to see their true feelings. Oh and Nice job on the Slap of Shade, he deserved it.

Crescent

i love the newnchapter and i ope you will update soon! i loike how shade is so possessive of Fine (It really HOT!)and i glad shade realizes his starting to ralize some feelings towards soon!

That was one weird chapter but I like it. And Bright's eyes are ruby not golden. The Shade and Fine part was weird but I like it. Update as soon as you can! -