you know, if you put a question in your summery your suppose to answer it.

and the reletionships are not abiguos. just watch end of eva and it tells you in shinji's own words that he goes with Asuka :
"Asuka, where are you? I need you. Rei scares me."

its... nice. Personally speaking, I prefer nice complete endings with no strings hanging. The question of who the girl is.. and what happens after the first story seems unknown. It would be nice to read more on how things progressed from the first to the last part.

A Well done peice that appeals to all fans, whatever their romantic preference regarding characters

Great writing. I like the mystery surrounding the woman. (My personal vote is for Asuka...but then again YOU are the writer. Do as you please) I would say more, but the subject matter was rather limited. I would definately like to see more.

I agree with the Dude Slayer in that the identity of the woman remains secret, but continue the story. Let the mystery continue.

Excellent work, small, yet so good at the same time.

It's very original... but I was kind of hoping you would give the full identity at the end of the fic. It has a lot of possibilities. I personally think you should expand this story into something bigger.

I see a lot of potential from this small piece --- so much better than what exists out there on FF.net. If you can work out the story to some kind of final conclusion to this "mystery woman", it would be a great story.

Or you can just leave it here. As it is, I believe it is almost complete on its own. For something so short, it's good.

You seem to have the same slant on the main characters as I have. I have an upcoming Story with a simlar musical theme, and your story has inspired me on how things might revolve differently now in that story.
Very good for a one-shot, and I hope to read more of your work!
dennisud

That was unexpected. You wrote a totally objective story in which any of the Eva Ladies could be used. I haven't seen one of those in ages.
I liked this fic. Leave the story unwritten, we don't need to know who she is. The mystery is more fun than the answer. ^_^

quite an interesting story, here. just one small detail... just about any of the girls except perhaps Hikari (who probably *wouldn't* be the one there) is eminently recognizable...asuka's red hair, rei's blue, mana's kindof weird brown/red... other than that, very nice story :)