Oh wow! This makes me want to cry :( poor Mab ... Beautifully written :) brava :)

This is so beautiful! I've been thinking a lot lately about Mab's 'demise', and you've captured it so simply, especially the repeated bits everything just seems to flow so gracefully! Good work! I look forward to reading more from you! :)

This poem is so beautiful! It conveys exactly how I view the realtionship between Mab and Merlin so I am in love with it. It is so sad, I really have so much sympathy for Mab. :(

:'( aww its so sad, I just want to grab her and hug her till she feels better poor sweet Mab, nicely done btw I'll reply to you yt message soon ;) xx