It was a good storyline,but there were a couple of things wrong with it. First of all you change the tenses from present to past and it is confusing for the reader. Secondly, Laura is over confident and the way that she talks makes her seem like a rash, out of line teen. If she were to appoach the extremist she most likely would have been killed then and there. I appreciate that you are trying to raise awareness but many elements of your story seemed unreal and didn't fit.

Sahar,I have to agree with you.

Do some research prior to writing a story.

Also,what does this have to do with American Girl?

How is this relevant to American Girl the magazine? Because I think you wrote for the wrong category XD

This is pretty offensive. I dont think you realize how many "peaceful" American muslims live in his country. You have all the details and facts about Isam wrong, there is no such things as Muslim writing, and if you dont know what they mean, they you probably wouldnt know that it's Arabic. It's just really offensive, and I'm offended. It's not the truth, that's probably nothing like what happened. No one has the right to say who will and who wont go to Hell or Heaven, even if you thinkit's really obvious.

I'd just like to say that I think your a very talented righter. And this story was very touching. I almost clicked away from it, mostly because I don't like romantic-ish stuff, but I'm very glad I didn't.

Great story, sad, but written well. It's nice to see people write about this. Beauty is truth, truth beauty.