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Marlene 9/9/11 . chapter 1
Greetings!
So I thought I'd check this out since I really love this series and I don't mind the pair. I definitely don't regret it at all- this is so well written. Your writing, when it's a dramatic piece, always manages to make my stomach twist. (In a good way.) The opening/half-break-up was excellent and I'm thinking my favourite part as well."I can't do this anymore.

Me either.

So this is good-bye, then.

I guess. See ya.
Yes.

Very impressive story. Great work, as always. Looking forward to your next update, whether it's with this or Facets.

Regards.
AnnaAza 9/4/11 . chapter 1
This is my second Zuko/Aang fic and my first Zuko and Aang break up oneshot. This has depth and emotions and it's wonderfully written! I'll be more than happy to add this to my favorites, and I'll keep an eye out for your companion piece!
Sugarlumpspark 9/3/11 . chapter 1
This story's pretty great so far! So, you're kind-of making a one shot series of this, huh? I hope so. Ending the story there is just torture. XD

Adding to favorites!
Kimberly T 9/3/11 . chapter 1
This was as visceral as a punch to the gut. I don't normally go for AU's or ZukAang, but I still have to say this was VERY well done.
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