Well,If this is your first fic,I just wanna tell you it's great a great storyI just wish it was longer.

I love the way you've done the drama.

I just love your style very much.

I will be waiting for more from you.

I have a story in White Collar also,and am working on another for White Collar.

I have always done stories for Hardcastle and McCormick fan fic.

JeanneZ84

very nice tension! emotion is such a powerful motivating factor!

I definitely could see this.

very heartbreaking Loved it!