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Holytaxaccountantcountsmytaxes 11/19/11 . chapter 18
Hi, I really enjoyed your story and I think it deserves more reviews. I liked the way Jack and Hammond reacted to the events and I just love the ending. It's so cute!)
Scritch 11/6/11 . chapter 18
Hooray, an ending with warm fuzzies! There really aren't enough good Jonas fics out there. I particularly liked the idea of goa'uld holy men; I've never seen that in the fandom before! Cheers and thanks for the good read)
Scritch 11/6/11 . chapter 11
Bah, stupid touch screen accidentally sending my review before it was done on the next chapter. Just wanted to temper my critique by reiterating that I'm still reading because I really am curious to see how things will play out! I've enjoyed the story thus far.
Scritch 11/6/11 . chapter 12
I've been thoroughly enjoying this story and your portrayal of Jonas, but... ehnn, I'm very much not a fan of the last part of this chapter. I can't imagine that the doctor would actually be stupid enough to tell someone in the military that his team engineered a man's murder. Particularly to that man's team, to Jack O'Neill of all people. It just seems so unbelievably stupid on his part. He just blatantly confessed to planning murder and practically handed himself up to be court-martialed! Why on earth wouldn't he just keep his mouth shut and feign ignorance to save his own skin, other than for the convenience of the
JazzieG 10/8/11 . chapter 18
I couldn't read and not review.

I was a huge fan of Jonas and was disappointed when he was only kept on for one season. Don't get me wrong, I like Daniel too but I had a soft spot for Jonas that Daniel just doesn't fill entirely! My personal opinion is that there was room enough for both characters.

That being said I've made it a point recently to read Jonas related fan fics and have enjoyed yours. I comment on this one alone because it is your most recent. It would be great to see more from you that include Jonas.
PatriciaS 9/17/11 . chapter 18
Been catching up on this one and enjoyed it very much, read the last group of chapters in one go off line so got the picture of SG1's reaction in one go. Loved everyone's reactions and tensions they all felt right and Jonas's understanding of the whole thing was good. Can imagine Hammond and Jack getting that angry with the officers. Loved the picture of the team showing their reaction to the medic after they realised Jonas's fears and Jack flying him home. The last chapter was a nice way to end the story showing he was going to fit in with the team and could see Jack teaching him to fly. Thanks for taking the time sharing
pain in the mikta 9/12/11 . chapter 18
Great ride !-D
Kez-o the Brave 9/12/11 . chapter 18
Awwww, such a cute ending! 3
SpyingBirdsagain 9/10/11 . chapter 15
Nice cliffy! I really like your timing and action/suspense scenes)
pain in the mikta 9/9/11 . chapter 13
Okay... I'm not a Jonas fan, but you have me hooked with this one !

Luved the part about the stetoscope that's soooooooooooo Jack ! LOL !
PatriciaS 9/9/11 . chapter 12
Interesting idea and story. The other teams reacitons to Jonas and events seem very plausable. Like your take on Jonas as he was a quick learner in the series and intelligent. Not surprised he has those fears all things considered or that he would try to rescue the other team. Also Jack feeling as he does after Ba'al is good ... now a quiet walk in the park umm don't thinks so. lol Thanks for sharing and looking forward to the rest.
SpyingBirdsagain 9/8/11 . chapter 11
Hi, thanks for writing about Jonas. Your story is great actually! I'm really loving it and I'm looking forward to next chapter!
Kez-o the Brave 9/7/11 . chapter 8
Uh, Hi, I guess. :D

I just wanted you to know that you're awsome. I really like this story and it's very nicely done, so I'm sorry for not bringing any constructive comments to the table. :P

These last few days you've made me totally giddy, and almost made me choke on my tea. Twice.
This is not a bad thing though, since this all came from joy when seeing the Alert-mails in my inbox.

I really like Jonas Quinn, and I think you've got a purdy nice shot at his character in this story.
So thank you for writing! K
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