It's been 9 yrs since I've read this story.

This is a classic!

Wow this has to be the best fanfic I have ever read your an awesome author and I wanna read the sequel right now! :D

my favorite charakter has to be Marth i dident eaven know of Roy untill i began reeding this fic marthxroy is now my number of uno pair thanx gyz for give this to me

This makes me skin crawl -shudders
gewd job :D

Wow, It's over... Just like that?

anyway, I like the way you write this, It's different.

Add it to my fave!

sorry, that's a really cheesy name. But it's my trademark so deal with it.

I'm confused. I read the ending and then I'm like, WTH? It's over?
And then it sunk in and I'm like, "NO! IT CAN'T END! I LOVED IT TOO MUCH!" etc.

good job. Not every fan fiction deserves this kind of praise from the Editor (seriously, ask around. I've reviewed a lot.
Anyway, I plan to read your sequel when I get the time. (WHY HAVEN'T YOU BEEN ON IN OVER A MONTH!
Good luck.

Keep writing.-The Editor (age 18. 9/22/09)

OI! my name is Margaret! Why'd you name ROY after me? Why not MARTH?

hi. I've been reading this story and just got a great idea for my own fanfiction. Do you mind if I borrow the main theme? Marth being exiled? That's all I'll use, I swear. No Marth/Roy stuff (though Roy will be around...I plan to give Marth a different "partner"). Please please please? And I love your story too. It's making collage a lot more entertaining.)

this is cool. I don't get why he kissed him though...I hope Roy's not gay...that would kind of wreck it for me...

I actually like this...and then I look back and wonder why I like it...but I do. So keep writing. :D

I loved it...

You're probably not on any more but IT IS STILL Awesome! You are the reason why I 3 Marth and Roy being together. I hate IkexRoy ones, they are not meant to be!

Come back on! You're like a legend to me!

SeaDremon

no swear bout it bth mean mart said he hav nuthin to do wit it anwsern roy is is piss off bout it lol

i luv it plus i read al of it

Ch. 30: Yay! My sleepless nights have ended, I'm almost done!
Ch. 31(Beginning)Hmm...this seems too short for everything... (Ending) No Sequel?

Overall...I'm on the way to the sequel. I can't put down both of yours' excellent work. I love it!

Kyaa! I loved your story, guys! I read it all in one day and let me tell you, it was a lot of fun. I love this pairing and the adventures you wrote for them were fantastic. I also liked their personalities you did such a good job with them! I am a Roy person myself, so I was especially appreciative of that part.

I'm kind of sad that I didn't get to read this from the beginning and review along the way. But on the other hand, it was nice to read it all at once because you guys ended chapters with some dreadful cliffhangers! And the ending was a cliffie, too! I'm glad that there's a sequel because otherwise I'd probably be complaining about it...It was so dreary. But there's a sequel, so it's all okay.

My only complaints about this story are the small number of typos (but hey, no one's perfect) and the fact that there wasn't a whole lot of romance. I am a total yaoi fangirl, so I say bring it on! The kissing scenes that were in here were lovely, though. So. More please! Can't wait to check out that sequel. You'll definitely be hearing from me again!

Kyon

THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!

I loved the way that Marth and Roy came in hating each other, but came out adoring each other! its really funny to read it the whole way through, but then go all the way back to the start and read it again! I LOVE IT!

The only thing I could add, is there could be more MarthXRoy in the end, but I still loved the ending!

I would love this to be made into a anime movie, or something like that! I think it would be quite successful!

Thank you so much for writing this!

P.S Marth Rocks! _