Wow...love it!

Such a great story and the perfect length, good job
Gonna read more of your stuff straight away! x

LOVE IT! Please make a sequel or wrote another about the business world very creative and talented writer so please continue writing!

I loved this! I'm so sad it's over can you please do a epligue on this story? Even if it's just one really long chapter?:)

That was such a fitting end. So romantic as always, but I also loved the newspaper extracts, that was a nice touch! Well done on a truly gorgeous story Hope all went well at the hospital too x

Wooo! Loved the ending!

Hope your tests went well and you're feeling better
Excited for TomBoy!

Crystal

This story is MIND-BLOWING. I love the idea of Gabriella beIng some exotic, unrecognized treasure that is taken advantage of then Troy comes in and saves her with a happily ever after in store . It was absolutely amazing the way you wrote the story, so good it's my new favorite Troyella fic.

Thankyou so much for writing a different kinda story:

lovd it!

may want to mark it as finished...

Yea ang but there are also no werewolves and vampires and troys dad wasnt a rich mo-fo... Its called fanFICTION

i just need to say this
i've been reading this story for a while now
3nEedxx

In response to your review
1-there no such country called arabia thereis a coupple of countries that talk arabian-This was addressed in chapter 1 author notes.

2-there are no more slaves in arabian countries there was in past-It's a story, not based on real-life(!
3-you have some grammer mistakes in the arab langug-This was also addressed in author notes.)

aww that was so sweet

i love how troy just popped the question and she said yes and how they eloped but are still planning for a big wedding

is it really the end? won't you make an epilogue for this? and i love how the title is such a perfect one for this chapter
i'm sad that this has to end because i really love this story but at the same time i can't wait to read your next one

continue wowing me with your beautiful stories

i just need to say this
i've been reading this story for a while now
1-there no such country called arabia thereis a coupple of countries that talk arabian
2-there are no more slaves in arabian countries there was in past
3-you have some grammer mistakes in the arab langug
thank and goodbye
2-

I loved it! Sad it's over!

Awwwww. This story is over! I'm going to miss it but i love the way you ended it! Perfect!

I hope your hospital visitation goes well!

ahhhh! so fucking cute! im so glad they got married x333 good luck with the doctors..and cant wait for the more amazing stories to come! x333